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A Joint Account of Love

A joint account of love You asked, we to open, my darling An idea, I certainly applauded With all my soul’s might But To my dismay soon realized That the only one depositing was I While you, always amounts withdrew Till all was gone, then you took a hike! © Demetrios Trifiatis 24 FEBRUARY 2015

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/25/2015 5:55:00 PM

That's the way it goes...you've penned it well.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/26/2015 7:42:00 AM

Unfortunately, yes, my dearest, M.L. Kiser. although sometimes it is for the best, as it was in this case! Thank you so very much for taking the time to comment in such a lovely way!

Eve Roper

Date: 2/25/2015 10:49:00 AM

It happens so often in life, but benefits are greater in other storehouses. Wonderful words of wisdom Blessings

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/25/2015 10:57:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Eve! Unfortunately it happens too often but sometimes is for the best! God bless you and a smile from me.

David Fisher

Date: 2/24/2015 7:30:00 PM

Great title and a clever subject.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/25/2015 1:06:00 AM

David, thank you for visiting me! I appreciate your comment very much!

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/24/2015 12:30:00 PM

Your words speak with the power of experience and your mind set caress the page with soft strokes of humor. Emile.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/24/2015 12:58:00 PM

Merci, mon ami, Emile! thank you so much for the nobility of your appraisal!

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/24/2015 8:25:00 AM

aww a one sided love sure hurts... touching write my friend.. and true.. nad

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/24/2015 9:20:00 AM

Thank you, Nad, very kind of you to visit!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/24/2015 7:05:00 AM

Great Metophor!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/24/2015 7:11:00 AM

Thank you, Richard! Imagine the poor fellow though for whom was not a metaphor but reality!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/24/2015 2:54:00 AM

Well thats a betrayal Demetrios,, well crafted write! God bless!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/24/2015 5:21:00 AM

It seems that it is, Dr. Upma. As you very well know, life is full of situations like that but we still have to be optimistic and keep looking till the right one walks into our life! Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment!