A Jingle Bell Bop

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A Jingle Bell Bop Santa Claus was worn out and deflated "Get yourself to bed" the Mrs stated She got in herself Dressed up as an elf And what arose up next was x-rated. Santa was due to be at his workshop So the frolicking came to a full stop Helpers had done well They'd made all things swell And all were dancing a jingle bell bop. The jingle bell bop got them excited Elves and reindeer as a team united They roped Santa in And made such a din Bopping around the workshop, ignited. Santa and crew worked very hard next day Getting all the presents onto the sleigh In the sky they rode Led by Rudolph’s nose To get gifts to children for Christmas day. They'd had plenty to eat, minced pies and wine Which went down a treat, 'twas simply divine Exhausted, but pleased All down on their knees Praying children were pleased and all was fine. Mrs Claus was happy Santa was back They were soon snuggled up back in the sack Santa was too tired To meet her desires So was no boppin’or ballin' the Jack * * * Christmas 2021

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/24/2021 8:37:00 PM

Very funny and entertaining Belle. I hope Santa visits you this year with good news and good health. Blessings xxoo

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/24/2021 9:11:00 PM

Thank you Connie, I’m sorry to say that Alan is being treated for another infection, and internal bleeding for which they cannot find the source. It’s almost six weeks now he’s been in hospital, a very worrying time. Blessings to you and best wishes for Christmas and the new year… Belle xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/22/2021 11:08:00 AM

A cute/fun write and picture. I hope you are doing better. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/24/2021 9:06:00 PM

Thank you Paula, it’s hard going with my husband still in hospital and very seriously ill. You have a wonderful blessed Christmas and a happy 2022 - Belle

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/14/2021 3:23:00 PM

Hello Belle ... very entertaining indeed and humorous too Belle - Lindsay

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/14/2021 4:46:00 PM

Thank you Lindsay, I’m so pleased you found the Lims entertaining, what more could any poet ask for. Warm wishes… Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2021 2:16:00 PM

what a fab string of limericks, hang on to the humour Belle, it will pull you through the tough times :-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/14/2021 4:42:00 PM

Thank you Jan, I remember you saying that poetry helped you to cope when your husband was ill, that’s how it is for me, though some days I just can’t read or write a thing, it's how it goes. Hugs, Belle xx

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/14/2021 11:13:00 AM

So funny, so well-written, Belle. I couldn't have sustained the theme through that many limericks. I greatly admire your skill. Thanks, too, for the laughs.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/14/2021 4:38:00 PM

Thank you Milton, I do love limericks, writing and reading those of other poets, I find them inspiring and therapeutic at a time like this that I’m going through with my husband so very ill… Belle