A Jill Nursery Rhyme

Did you read about me going up a hill, that was with Jack not with Bill. Guess you know my drill, "Jack and Jill" sure had a big thrill.
My dear friend "Little Jack Horner," loved sitting in the corner. I wanted to be outside but he was a mourner, he would also read about being a foreigner.
"Jack Be Nimble" was sure quick, our fun neighbor was never sick. Pretty candles he did pick, jumping high over the lit wick.
"Jack Sprat" and his wife, she carried a big knife. He had no fat in his life, she had only lean with strife.
Hope you have enjoyed reading about me, I am Jill and I want to be set free. Yes, on that hill I hurt my knee, that fall made me pee.

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Date: 11/22/2024 11:23:00 AM
I remember this creative one. Belated congrats to you
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/24/2024 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Great to see. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write again. It was so much fun write. Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 11/20/2024 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula. Well deserved my friend. Emilia : )
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Date: 11/21/2024 10:46:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Great to see. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write. It was a fun rhyme to write. Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 11/19/2024 12:32:00 AM
Hey Paula, Your fun write a winner, congrats dear friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/19/2024 9:02:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Great to see. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write. It was a ton of fun to write. Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 11/18/2024 6:35:00 PM
Paula, I'm back to say "CONGRATS"! Janice
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Date: 11/19/2024 9:01:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Great to see you back. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write again. It was fun to write. Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 11/18/2024 10:31:00 AM
"2 Place" A Jill Nursery Rhyme~Date Written:10/28/2024~Written By Human Poet......
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Date: 11/20/2024 7:42:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Great to see you back here. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write again. I enjoyed writing this fun write. Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/18/2024 2:37:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win Paula, it was a lovely poem you wrote about nursery rhyme characters… Beryl
Date: 11/18/2024 5:18:00 AM
Great job! Congratulations on your win!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/18/2024 10:33:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Great to see you. Glad you found my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" to be a Great job. It was a ton of fun writing this one. Laugh away on this Autumn day................
Date: 11/18/2024 5:00:00 AM
A fun read. Greatly enjoyed. Congratulations dear Paula on your podium win.
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Date: 11/18/2024 10:31:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Great to see you. Glad you found my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" to be A fun read. Greatly enjoyed. Laugh away on this Autumn day................
Date: 11/18/2024 1:47:00 AM
A fun and very cute write, Paula. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thank you for entering. Keep writing dear friend...Charlie
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Date: 11/18/2024 10:30:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Great to see you. Glad you found my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" to be A fun and very cute write. I had a ton of fun writing this one for your wonderful contest. Thanks for my placement/thanks for having it. I hope you will have more like this..... Laugh away on this Autumn day................
Date: 11/11/2024 7:26:00 AM
- Fun to read Paula, thank you very much :) - hugs
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Date: 11/12/2024 8:16:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you found my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" to be a Fun to read. I enjoyed writing this one. Hugs... Laugh away on this Autumn day................
Date: 11/5/2024 5:27:00 AM
Hi Paula. A wonderful and fun read. Enjoyed how you used the various Jack characters too...very clever. Good luck in the contest. Emilia : )
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Date: 11/5/2024 8:30:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your Good luck in the contest. Great to see you. Glad you found my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" to be A wonderful and fun read. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Laugh away on this Autumn day................
Date: 11/2/2024 8:13:00 AM
Dear Paula, I so enjoyed your string of cleverly revamped nursery rhymes. Your verses are filled with your delightful humor. Giggle worthy throughout, especially your last line. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/3/2024 7:51:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write. I love to give out laughs or smiles or giggles or all 3... Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 11/2/2024 7:37:00 AM
Such a clever approach to the prompt, Paula!! Janice
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Date: 11/3/2024 7:49:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you found my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write to be  Such a clever approach to the prompt. It was fun to write.... Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 10/31/2024 12:45:00 AM
A wonderful poem with RHYTHM AND RHYME. Loved this Jill nursery rhyme, a certain fave for me. Hugs and blessings dear friend Paula, Jennifer.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2024 9:35:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you Loved reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write. I see FAV??? Thanks...You just made my day a happy one. Hugs... Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 10/29/2024 10:41:00 PM
A fine mix of nursery rhymes. Pity she missed wearing babies panties :)
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Date: 10/31/2024 9:33:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you found reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write to be A fine mix of nursery rhymes. It was fun to put this together. Laugh away on this Autumn day................. 
Date: 10/29/2024 2:49:00 PM
Hello Paula, I enjoyed your nursery rhyme. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/31/2024 10:52:00 AM
Hello Paula, It is always nice to see you Paula. I enjoyed your nursery rhyme. Hugs./Darlene/
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2024 9:29:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write. Hugs... Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 10/29/2024 10:06:00 AM
A humorous read Paula, Jill is certainly getting her thrill, so many nursery rhymes coming about her, since that fall on the hill. All the best, Beryl
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2024 9:28:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for All the best. Great to see you. Glad you found reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write to be A humorous read. Maybe Jill got hurt with that fall on the hill. Hahaha!!! Laugh away on this Autumn day................. 
Date: 10/29/2024 9:47:00 AM
Was always wary of Jack the lad on that hill.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2024 9:25:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write. Maybe Jack is one to watch out for... Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 10/28/2024 6:15:00 PM
Great job with spledid ..humor served to us as a poem)))) Pangie xxx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2024 9:24:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write. Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 10/28/2024 1:34:00 PM
SO cute. Hmmm, maybe Jack sprat's wife is cutting off her hubbie's fat with her big knife!!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2024 9:23:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you found reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write to be SO cute. Never know what she will use her knife for. Hahaha!!! Laugh away on this Autumn day................. 
Date: 10/28/2024 12:42:00 PM
This was a delightful fun read with a humorous punch line! Great job!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2024 9:21:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you found reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write to be a delightful fun read. Laugh away on this Autumn day................. 
Date: 10/28/2024 10:40:00 AM
Wow, a humorous take on classis jack and jill rhymes.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/28/2024 12:22:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my humor with my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write. It was way toooooo much fun to write. Laugh away on this Autumn day................
Date: 10/28/2024 10:00:00 AM
Lol, enjoyed the humour Paula, hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/28/2024 10:31:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my humor with my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write. It was so much fun to write. I am well. Hope you are well.  Laughing is good for everyone... Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 10/28/2024 9:05:00 AM
Laughing at final two lines..lol
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Date: 10/28/2024 10:28:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "A Jill Nursery Rhyme" write. Great to read you are Laughing at my final two lines. That makes me happy.... Laugh away on this Autumn day.................
Date: 10/28/2024 8:59:00 AM
A Jill Nursery Rhyme~Date Written:10/28/2024~Human Written By Poet
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