Beautiful Scars Poet Jueju

A Jaded Farewell

Her farewell note still carries
her scent; though softly FADED-
Her death haunts like a fresh tomb,
as my strength left me JADED...



Form J - Jueju - Poetry Contest
Qiuje
Broken Wings
March 20, 2017

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Kim Merryman April 3, 2017 at 12:13 PM Beautifully written, Laura! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 7:44 PM Very well crafted one on JADED theme. Congrats, Laura.

James Inman April 2, 2017 at 6:04 PM Wonderful write Laura, sad.

Constance La France April 2, 2017 at 4:20 PM Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju, it really touched my heart~

Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2017 at 5:59 AM - Sad but beautiful, Laura - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)