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A Jaded Farewell

Her farewell note still carries her scent; though softly FADED- Her death haunts like a fresh tomb, as my strength left me JADED... Form J - Jueju - Poetry Contest Qiuje Broken Wings March 20, 2017

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Date: 4/3/2017 12:13:00 PM
Beautifully written, Laura! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 4/2/2017 7:44:00 PM
Very well crafted one on JADED theme. Congrats, Laura.
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Date: 4/2/2017 6:04:00 PM
Wonderful write Laura, sad.
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Date: 4/2/2017 4:20:00 PM
Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju, it really touched my heart~
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Date: 3/20/2017 5:59:00 AM
- Sad but beautiful, Laura - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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