Sotto Poet Poet Dramatic Monologue

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A Humane World

How is it viable that life could alter the course,
from people to people? 
What makes you quiver in the middle of the night 
to play with my agony?    
Until it is encircled by a wing of misery.   
That has decayed when I embrace the gloom to reach you. 

Even though I may find hillsides to be the Snowden, 
As I scream out a chuckle, the humming torrent, 
from the Empyreans stopped. 
Be that they are on a brainless creative path, as this might,

What's more, there was a strand of the first dawn,
daylight as I got to it, In either case.
I can visually perceive an expanding synergy
within the grace before the murkiness 
that Involves me in the dolefulness. 

O, I love behaving with mate's optical discernment. 
But whatever story could be, the enraged planet 
Is making a beeline for the egress.
Forlorn, exhausted, paused, abstracted, and stress.

In a world full of velveteens placed overarches, 
absurdity reigns supreme.
The Spectra in Solitude of even a Young Dreamer 
With a dazzling sense of vision,
 
I'm expecting the end of the world. 
To find my way into the norm of emotions, Withal.
I'm on my way to another light pole. 
Where you make the most out of my verses. 
Decorate my hardbound book with your scripts.


Dramatic Monologue poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

2nd place contest winner

Date written: 02/26/2021

Dramatic Monologue
Edward Ibeh

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Paula Goldsmith January 26, 2022 at 8:42 AM Congratulations on your win. A deep thought write. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day.............

Beata Agustin January 25, 2022 at 9:55 PM Congrats! Thanks so much for sharing your heart through this dramatic monologue of yours earnestly expressed in your excellent poetic style. Indeed, thanks for your participation. God bless you. Sotto Poet January 26, 2022 at 6:08 AM Thanks for reading, placing, and commenting very nicely on my poem. Kindest regards.

Valsa George January 25, 2022 at 7:56 PM This is great poetry and I cannot fully fathom its depths... ! I must admit my inability ! Congratulations on your great win my friend !

Edward Ibeh March 14, 2021 at 5:34 AM Resma has taken the words out of my mouth. I totally agree with her not only on this excellent piece, but you as a poet as well. Congratulations on your win in my contest, Lasaab! Sotto Poet March 14, 2021 at 6:00 AM Hi Edward. Your review is so very generous, and I thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted to see my poem among the winners in your contest. Thanks so much, and best wishes in future contests.My most profound regards, Edward.

Besma Riabi Dziri March 4, 2021 at 3:00 AM A work so rich of thoughts.. A poetry of many a layer! We cannot remain still on the surface of words.. rather get immersed in the depth of the poet's vision.. follow an unlinear thread of an inner wondering and turmoil.. pondering on the wishes and dreams.. as a reader, so impressed by your poetry! and looking forward to "get the most of your verses"! Keep shining! My deepest regards and blessings. Sotto Poet March 4, 2021 at 5:50 AM Appreciate your very touching feedback and honest sentences. My sincere and deepest regards to you, sister Besma.