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How is it viable that life could alter the course, from people to people? What makes you quiver in the middle of the night to play with my agony? Until it is encircled by a wing of misery. That has decayed when I embrace the gloom to reach you. Even though I may find hillsides to be the Snowden, As I scream out a chuckle, the humming torrent, from the Empyreans stopped. Be that they are on a brainless creative path, as this might, What's more, there was a strand of the first dawn, daylight as I got to it, In either case. I can visually perceive an expanding synergy within the grace before the murkiness that Involves me in the dolefulness. O, I love behaving with mate's optical discernment. But whatever story could be, the enraged planet Is making a beeline for the egress. Forlorn, exhausted, paused, abstracted, and stress. In a world full of velveteens placed overarches, absurdity reigns supreme. The Spectra in Solitude of even a Young Dreamer With a dazzling sense of vision, I'm expecting the end of the world. To find my way into the norm of emotions, Withal. I'm on my way to another light pole. Where you make the most out of my verses. Decorate my hardbound book with your scripts.
Dramatic Monologue poetry form only. Sponsored by: Beata Agustin 2nd place contest winner Date written: 02/26/2021 Dramatic Monologue Edward Ibeh

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Date: 1/26/2022 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A deep thought write. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 1/25/2022 9:55:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks so much for sharing your heart through this dramatic monologue of yours earnestly expressed in your excellent poetic style. Indeed, thanks for your participation. God bless you.
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Date: 1/26/2022 6:08:00 AM
Thanks for reading, placing, and commenting very nicely on my poem. Kindest regards.
Date: 1/25/2022 7:56:00 PM
This is great poetry and I cannot fully fathom its depths... ! I must admit my inability ! Congratulations on your great win my friend !
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Date: 3/14/2021 5:34:00 AM
Resma has taken the words out of my mouth. I totally agree with her not only on this excellent piece, but you as a poet as well. Congratulations on your win in my contest, Lasaab!
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Date: 3/14/2021 6:00:00 AM
Hi Edward. Your review is so very generous, and I thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted to see my poem among the winners in your contest. Thanks so much, and best wishes in future contests.My most profound regards, Edward.
Date: 3/4/2021 3:00:00 AM
A work so rich of thoughts.. A poetry of many a layer! We cannot remain still on the surface of words.. rather get immersed in the depth of the poet's vision.. follow an unlinear thread of an inner wondering and turmoil.. pondering on the wishes and dreams.. as a reader, so impressed by your poetry! and looking forward to "get the most of your verses"! Keep shining! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 3/4/2021 5:50:00 AM
Appreciate your very touching feedback and honest sentences. My sincere and deepest regards to you, sister Besma.

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