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Calorie counting ceases Decadent and so delicious Every single crumb is savoured Forget sharing, it’s all mine! Going to start my diet … tomorrow! Let’s do some Alphabet Sponsored by Sara Kendrick 10-01-17

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Sandrakean Kean

Date: 3/16/2018 2:13:00 AM

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2017 11:54:00 AM

I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..The poem reminded me of my mother's seven layer chocolate cake..She made several kinds of chocolate cake but the seven layer one was my favorite..She used the fudge recipe on the Hershey's Cocoa box and did not cook it to the candy stage..Yum...Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 10/19/2017 11:59:00 AM

oh that sounds gorgeous Sara!:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/12/2017 11:55:00 AM

She also made German chocolate cake, Coke-A-Cola chocolate cake..I am sure there were more but can't remember them now..One could only eat a very small slice but that slice was decadent..Sara

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/11/2017 8:35:00 AM

Nicely penned ... Congratulations on your placement, Jan ...

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2017 11:23:00 AM

Thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/10/2017 10:48:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Jan - blessings and keep up the great work! :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2017 3:07:00 AM

Thanks Greg:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 10/10/2017 3:27:00 PM

Congrats, Jan, we tied again!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2017 4:22:00 PM

I think we all tied lol of course some may think they got better placements the higher up the list they are lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/5/2017 11:30:00 AM

A tasty and tempting ABC poem, Jan. What about a date & walnut cake...and a strong black coffee!! Hugs // paul ps....the Gloria Choir will be performing in Safi later this month; the organist is Graham Kirkland from the Isle of Man.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2017 11:47:00 AM

I will go for the cake from Fontanelle's with the cherries and marzipan and a cup of tea lol , you can have the date and walnut and coffee. Oh wow about Graham Kirkland that is wonderful to hear:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/2/2017 10:27:00 AM

Hi Jan? Chocolate cake is my favorite. And you're not sharing. No fare! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2017 4:40:00 PM

Oh I have so many lovely people wanting to share I guess I better bake a bigger cake:-) hugs jan xx

John Gondolf

Date: 10/2/2017 7:04:00 AM

Chocolate cake for breakfast...works for me! Great poem Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2017 4:41:00 PM

Oh not for breakfast John but with a nice cup of tea in the afternoon :-):-) hugs Jan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/2/2017 6:03:00 AM

This is a spectacular write my friend! I truly loved reading your delightful piece this morning! I don't think I have a diet, I just eat and don't eat! No, I do try to eat right, though I don't eat much vegetables...nothing green anyway! But I do love a piece of chocolate cake every once and awhile! I loved your humor in this incredible piece (of cake) you have written! Thank you for the mouth-watering write! Great Work Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2017 4:43:00 PM

I have cut down on cake, biscuits and chocolate since my hubby got diabetes but this theme came to me for the contest and from the comments it seems few can resist chocolate cake:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 10/2/2017 4:46:00 AM

Lovely, Jan, especially since it's my birthday today ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2017 4:44:00 PM

Oh Darren i would share my cake with you on this special day:-) happy birthday my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/2/2017 12:05:00 AM

I love the poem, Jan, a winner already. I know I didn't do mine correctly , but I tried.. hugs Eve

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/1/2017 11:45:00 PM

You had me at the title!!!

Carole Duet

Date: 10/1/2017 8:29:00 PM

Lol...I like this one...sounds like me! yummm

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2017 8:22:00 PM

oh you did this SO well!!! With great ease, Jan. And it's delicious too!!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/1/2017 6:15:00 PM

I'll fight you for it

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2017 6:18:00 PM

I may be tempted to share as it's you Tim:-):-) hugs jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 10/1/2017 5:38:00 PM

Awesome, as long as it's not about stiffy cocky pudding!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2017 6:06:00 PM

ha ha ha I resisted performing that poem at Litfest yesterday lol but it is one of my very favourite funny poems I've written:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/1/2017 5:32:00 PM

ha! you have nailed this one, jan! please cut a slice for me...

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2017 6:05:00 PM

I'd love to share a cuppa and a slice of cake with your Ilene!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/1/2017 4:35:00 PM

That was fun and yummy. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2017 4:36:00 PM

Thanks Agnes:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/1/2017 3:55:00 PM

Ohh Jan what a delicious write this is. I love it. Thank God there's always tomorrow - to start a diet! lol! Excellent write. Good luck in the contest!:)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2017 4:27:00 PM

I had fun with the poem Susan and find chocolate cake hard to resist - I rarely bake my brownies now but i did make a batch when my son was home in August:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/1/2017 3:02:00 PM

i had some fasting days ago, but it's sunday, so lemme have that cake.i finished the apple struddle and still hungry.. delicious offering, jan!..huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2017 3:07:00 PM

Ooh apple strudel sounds even better than chocolate cake:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2017 2:54:00 PM

- It looked really tasty .... not a little bit to share :) - Well done, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2017 3:06:00 PM

Oh no sharing lol sorry Anne Lise its all gone:-( hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/1/2017 2:44:00 PM

Tomorrow's always a good day to start a diet ;) Yummy poem!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2017 2:51:00 PM

But they say tomorrow never comes Kim:-) hugs Jan xx