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A Huge Slice of Chocolate Cake

Calorie counting ceases
Decadent and so delicious
Every single crumb is savoured
Forget sharing, it’s all mine!

Going to start my diet … tomorrow!


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10-01-17

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2017

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Sandrakean Kean

March 16, 2018 at 2:13 AM

If i don't share my testimony then i will be selfish....stingy and an ungrateful woman. Dr Lucky the great brought back joy...happiness...into my life and took away tears..sorrow by bring back my marriage of 10 years with my husband with just on come and go reunion spell. i was a sad woman before i meet Dr Lucky but it took him just 24 hrs to change everything now am happy again because my man is always by my side. pls contact him directly on : Email: [email protected] Mrs Sandra Kean

October 12, 2017 at 11:54 AM

I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..The poem reminded me of my mother's seven layer chocolate cake..She made several kinds of chocolate cake but the seven layer one was my favorite..She used the fudge recipe on the Hershey's Cocoa box and did not cook it to the candy stage..Yum...Sara

October 19, 2017 at 11:59 AM

oh that sounds gorgeous Sara!:-) hugs Jan xx

October 12, 2017 at 11:55 AM

She also made German chocolate cake, Coke-A-Cola chocolate cake..I am sure there were more but can't remember them now..One could only eat a very small slice but that slice was decadent..Sara

October 11, 2017 at 8:35 AM

Nicely penned ... Congratulations on your placement, Jan ...

October 11, 2017 at 11:23 AM

Thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden

October 10, 2017 at 10:48 PM

Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Jan - blessings and keep up the great work! :-)

October 11, 2017 at 3:07 AM

Thanks Greg:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

October 10, 2017 at 3:27 PM

Congrats, Jan, we tied again!

October 10, 2017 at 4:22 PM

I think we all tied lol of course some may think they got better placements the higher up the list they are lol:-) hugs jan xx

October 5, 2017 at 11:30 AM

A tasty and tempting ABC poem, Jan. What about a date & walnut cake...and a strong black coffee!! Hugs // paul ps....the Gloria Choir will be performing in Safi later this month; the organist is Graham Kirkland from the Isle of Man.

October 5, 2017 at 11:47 AM

I will go for the cake from Fontanelle's with the cherries and marzipan and a cup of tea lol , you can have the date and walnut and coffee. Oh wow about Graham Kirkland that is wonderful to hear:-) hugs Jan xx

October 2, 2017 at 10:27 AM

Hi Jan? Chocolate cake is my favorite. And you're not sharing. No fare! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

October 2, 2017 at 4:40 PM

Oh I have so many lovely people wanting to share I guess I better bake a bigger cake:-) hugs jan xx

October 2, 2017 at 7:04 AM

Chocolate cake for breakfast...works for me! Great poem Jan.

October 2, 2017 at 4:41 PM

Oh not for breakfast John but with a nice cup of tea in the afternoon :-):-) hugs Jan xx

October 2, 2017 at 6:03 AM

This is a spectacular write my friend! I truly loved reading your delightful piece this morning! I don't think I have a diet, I just eat and don't eat! No, I do try to eat right, though I don't eat much vegetables...nothing green anyway! But I do love a piece of chocolate cake every once and awhile! I loved your humor in this incredible piece (of cake) you have written! Thank you for the mouth-watering write! Great Work Jan!!

October 2, 2017 at 4:43 PM

I have cut down on cake, biscuits and chocolate since my hubby got diabetes but this theme came to me for the contest and from the comments it seems few can resist chocolate cake:-) hugs Jan xx

October 2, 2017 at 4:46 AM

Lovely, Jan, especially since it's my birthday today ;)

October 2, 2017 at 4:44 PM

Oh Darren i would share my cake with you on this special day:-) happy birthday my friend:-) hugs jan xx

October 2, 2017 at 12:05 AM

I love the poem, Jan, a winner already. I know I didn't do mine correctly , but I tried.. hugs Eve

October 1, 2017 at 11:45 PM

You had me at the title!!!

October 1, 2017 at 8:29 PM

Lol...I like this one...sounds like me! yummm

Andrea Dietrich

October 1, 2017 at 8:22 PM

oh you did this SO well!!! With great ease, Jan. And it's delicious too!!

October 1, 2017 at 6:15 PM

I'll fight you for it

October 1, 2017 at 6:18 PM

I may be tempted to share as it's you Tim:-):-) hugs jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

October 1, 2017 at 5:38 PM

Awesome, as long as it's not about stiffy cocky pudding!

October 1, 2017 at 6:06 PM

ha ha ha I resisted performing that poem at Litfest yesterday lol but it is one of my very favourite funny poems I've written:-) hugs jan xx

October 1, 2017 at 5:32 PM

ha! you have nailed this one, jan! please cut a slice for me...

October 1, 2017 at 6:05 PM

I'd love to share a cuppa and a slice of cake with your Ilene!!!:-) hugs jan xx

October 1, 2017 at 4:35 PM

That was fun and yummy. Good luck in the contest.

October 1, 2017 at 4:36 PM

Thanks Agnes:-) hugs jan xx

October 1, 2017 at 3:55 PM

Ohh Jan what a delicious write this is. I love it. Thank God there's always tomorrow - to start a diet! lol! Excellent write. Good luck in the contest!:)

October 1, 2017 at 4:27 PM

I had fun with the poem Susan and find chocolate cake hard to resist - I rarely bake my brownies now but i did make a batch when my son was home in August:-) hugs Jan xx

October 1, 2017 at 3:02 PM

i had some fasting days ago, but it's sunday, so lemme have that cake.i finished the apple struddle and still hungry.. delicious offering, jan!..huggs

October 1, 2017 at 3:07 PM

Ooh apple strudel sounds even better than chocolate cake:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 1, 2017 at 2:54 PM

- It looked really tasty .... not a little bit to share :) - Well done, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

October 1, 2017 at 3:06 PM

Oh no sharing lol sorry Anne Lise its all gone:-( hugs jan xx

October 1, 2017 at 2:44 PM

Tomorrow's always a good day to start a diet ;) Yummy poem!

October 1, 2017 at 2:51 PM

But they say tomorrow never comes Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

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