Kim Rodrigues Poet Limerick

A Huge Moon

Once upon a time a huge moon flew between my eyes.
I beheld a starry night, not amused, my demise.

   T’was at the crack of dawn
   On a summer’s lawn.

Like Daliwood, time displaced, as you revealed your disguise.

1/30/2018

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Lunita Blanca January 30, 2018 at 8:39 AM Kim, To reveal our disguises takes a lot of courage. Kim Rodrigues January 30, 2018 at 8:46 AM For sure! We all have masks to reveal or not, even to ourselves! Thanks, Carlos!

Silent One January 30, 2018 at 8:15 AM Interesting format for a limerick, this is really good... Jack Ellison writes some great lims... Maybe have a read of his if you have time.. Kim Rodrigues January 30, 2018 at 8:18 AM He’s my inspiration! Read a few of his today! Thanks, Silent!

Jan Allison January 30, 2018 at 7:44 AM What intriguing imagery kim I wonder what type of moon lol:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues January 30, 2018 at 8:18 AM Oh, I think you know, my friend! ;)