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A Huge Moon

Once upon a time a huge moon flew between my eyes. I beheld a starry night, not amused, my demise. T’was at the crack of dawn On a summer’s lawn. Like Daliwood, time displaced, as you revealed your disguise. 1/30/2018

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Date: 1/30/2018 8:39:00 AM
Kim, To reveal our disguises takes a lot of courage.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2018 8:46:00 AM
For sure! We all have masks to reveal or not, even to ourselves! Thanks, Carlos!
Date: 1/30/2018 8:15:00 AM
Interesting format for a limerick, this is really good... Jack Ellison writes some great lims... Maybe have a read of his if you have time..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2018 8:18:00 AM
He’s my inspiration! Read a few of his today! Thanks, Silent!
Date: 1/30/2018 7:44:00 AM
What intriguing imagery kim I wonder what type of moon lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2018 8:18:00 AM
Oh, I think you know, my friend! ;)

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