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A House Is Not a Home

A house is not a home it is but my rest ground when the suns heat rains on my skin and the light of night envelopes my eye i return to meet the gloom of my house but my home was warm the smiling faces the noise of wrinkled ages and the tales they told they bring life to my home in their aging faces but my house and it's coldness just enough to keep me warm till dawn i am not proud of this address the silence that trails the street and the smiles that were never returned i barely know my neighbour but who cares? Not he not I this house can't be my home. I must make haste and pass the night and maybe other nights to come until i find my home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/6/2016 2:50:00 PM
Nice to see this one again...
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Date: 1/7/2016 6:49:00 PM
AWESOME
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Date: 11/1/2015 5:18:00 AM
what a beautiful and excellent piece. The flow of your write depicted imagery that brough your write to life in this reader's sense. Welcome to this wonderful community my friend.............A.M.
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Date: 11/30/2013 2:56:00 AM
Nice one. Welcome to Poetrysoup. I know you'll enjoy being with this group. I look forward to reading more poems from you.
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Date: 11/29/2013 11:22:00 PM
A wonderful write,kudos! Sure u find ur home someday mayb in poetrysoup. Welcome to poetrysoup,here u find d poetic treasures in vast quantities. Alwaz, Based oin Belief
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Date: 11/29/2013 11:36:00 AM
Welcome Danga to PS, You come some great swag hope to follow on more of your poems..This is is a family you be proud of always
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Date: 11/29/2013 5:41:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Yusuf ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/29/2013 5:40:00 AM
Yusuf, strong message, I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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