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A Hopping Rabbit

a hopping rabbit on the morning grass... mauled dewdrops © kash poet ================= Placement: 3rd;(Nov. 2011) Contest:Animal haiku Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/1/2011 12:31:00 AM

all my senses are alive, kashi buddy.. congrats! :) huggs

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2011 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Animal Haiku" contest Kash. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 11/30/2011 1:56:00 AM

Kash congrats on your win, this is stunningly good..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/29/2011 10:47:00 PM

KASH;-) ,.. Congratulations on your wonderful HAIKU..FOR DEBBIE~ Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/29/2011 9:43:00 PM

Very interesting to use "mauled" in your third line, Kash! You sure are raking it in with these haiku, yay for you! Super congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2011 9:35:00 PM

WAY to GO, Kash! So glad to see this high on the list, my friend. LUv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/28/2011 7:25:00 PM

nice... one toooo Kash... have a nice one,..p.d.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/26/2011 3:36:00 PM

so charming! and I loved the word mauled! Light & Love

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/24/2011 7:34:00 PM

damp rabbit's feet....such a pretty scene, Kash. Hey...I will buy your photo 4 my avatar...I see u don;t need yours...I thot I'd be a guy! ha ha.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2011 8:06:00 AM

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2011 8:05:00 AM

Hey, Kash, I want to remark on how lovely you are in your avatar. hahaha. You slay me! You were screaming for an Avatar so that people would realize you were a guy, and then you put up a female! Is this lovely creature your wife then? ok, on your haiku. That is so cute to describe dewdrops as mauled. A very original image, my friend. LUv,Andrea