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a hopping rabbit

a hopping rabbit on the morning grass... mauled dewdrops © kash poet ================= Placement: 3rd;(Nov. 2011) Contest:Animal haiku Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 12/1/2011 12:31:00 AM
all my senses are alive, kashi buddy.. congrats! :) huggs
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Date: 11/30/2011 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Animal Haiku" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2011 1:56:00 AM
Kash congrats on your win, this is stunningly good..David
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Date: 11/29/2011 10:47:00 PM
KASH;-) ,.. Congratulations on your wonderful HAIKU..FOR DEBBIE~ Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
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Date: 11/29/2011 9:43:00 PM
Very interesting to use "mauled" in your third line, Kash! You sure are raking it in with these haiku, yay for you! Super congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/29/2011 9:35:00 PM
WAY to GO, Kash! So glad to see this high on the list, my friend. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/28/2011 7:25:00 PM
nice... one toooo Kash... have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 11/26/2011 3:36:00 PM
so charming! and I loved the word mauled! Light & Love
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Date: 11/24/2011 7:34:00 PM
damp rabbit's feet....such a pretty scene, Kash. Hey...I will buy your photo 4 my avatar...I see u don;t need yours...I thot I'd be a guy! ha ha.
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Date: 11/24/2011 8:06:00 AM
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Date: 11/24/2011 8:05:00 AM
Hey, Kash, I want to remark on how lovely you are in your avatar. hahaha. You slay me! You were screaming for an Avatar so that people would realize you were a guy, and then you put up a female! Is this lovely creature your wife then? ok, on your haiku. That is so cute to describe dewdrops as mauled. A very original image, my friend. LUv,Andrea
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