Dean Masciarelli Poet Free verse

A Home Is Far From Being a Home

(In a moment of complete sadness these thoughts crossed my mind
And I am sure anyone who has been all alone will understand)


A home is far from being a home

Written By D.A.M

Tuesday, November 24, 2009


A home is far from being a  home 

Especially when 

There is no one else around

And there is nothing but silence

And a whole house 

That is full of empty rooms

To consume our minds with sadness

Because it is like living in a casket

That is six feet in the ground

That is waiting to be filled up with sand

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Charmaine Chircop November 24, 2009 at 3:38 PM I know the feeling of a house and a home,,and its always so nice to be home,,lovely write Dean,a pleasure to read you--Charma

Anthony Nutter November 24, 2009 at 6:51 AM Sad but so very true. Excellent write just the same. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit