A Hollow

I have a story to tell
About an empty word
Least some would surely say
Until this story's heard

Hollow's the word I speak of
Something empty in a shell
Just rap a hollow log
Or sit on one a spell

Hollow is an empty word
At least that's how it seems
Until  you understand 
Just what all it brings

Living in a hollow
Or you may say a valley
Understanding what it's like
When hearing someone jolly

There are so many things
Though little brings a thrill
Like hearing lovely echoes
Coming from the other hill

Now silence comes at night
But birds will wake you in the day
Though nothing causes fright
As long as no one goes astray

Now should you want some fun
That will rock them there hills
Just dynamite the hollow
But watch out for the bills

See living in the hollow
Can be so very full
It can be lots of fun
Maybe even a little cruel

One thing that it isn't
Nor can it ever be
Is void of Gods beauty
Come take a look and see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A. Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:44 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Charles!
A  Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:41 AM
wonderful win. SKAT
Lindley Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 9:36 AM
A well written piece my friend. I once lived in a hollow world but it was not the same thing as your fine write describes. With help I moved away and all it took was to sincerely pray.
Revolution Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 6:45 AM
Very nicely done :)
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