Denis Bruce Poet Rispetto

A hive of activity

Erato leads the mind right into the zone
To look for the sweet nectar sought by the bee
As it fills its sacs with light, colour and tone
Heavy winged ,replete ,it returns to its tree
There its delicate imagery to hone
Ere it is ready to leave and be set free
It's in that moment a poem comes  alive
Emerging fully developed from its hive

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Marilyn Williams February 17, 2025 at 12:02 AM It's a favorite of mine to write in this fashion sometimes. Denis Bruce February 17, 2025 at 1:56 AM It works for me with some poems.Thank you,Marilyn,for sharing your thoughts

Marilyn Williams February 16, 2025 at 11:40 PM Short and sweet. It is to the point of the topic. Nice approach. Denis Bruce February 17, 2025 at 1:57 AM I so love your succinct comments,Marilyn

Marilyn Williams February 16, 2025 at 11:30 PM The rhyming of the thought, appeals to me. And it expresses every line of the poem. Denis Bruce February 17, 2025 at 1:59 AM I feel honoured that my poem has made such an impression upon you,Marilyn