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A hive of activity

Erato leads the mind right into the zone To look for the sweet nectar sought by the bee As it fills its sacs with light, colour and tone Heavy winged ,replete ,it returns to its tree There its delicate imagery to hone Ere it is ready to leave and be set free It's in that moment a poem comes alive Emerging fully developed from its hive

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Date: 2/17/2025 12:02:00 AM
It's a favorite of mine to write in this fashion sometimes.
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Denis Bruce
Date: 2/17/2025 1:56:00 AM
It works for me with some poems.Thank you,Marilyn,for sharing your thoughts
Date: 2/16/2025 11:40:00 PM
Short and sweet. It is to the point of the topic. Nice approach.
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Denis Bruce
Date: 2/17/2025 1:57:00 AM
I so love your succinct comments,Marilyn
Date: 2/16/2025 11:30:00 PM
The rhyming of the thought, appeals to me. And it expresses every line of the poem.
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Date: 2/17/2025 1:59:00 AM
I feel honoured that my poem has made such an impression upon you,Marilyn

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