A Historic Event

Mystery of a life born from another, cry of the baby and death of the mother, amidst war, military tent in the wild, during the royal birth of her fourteenth child. little pink princess wailed for maternal milk, blue and cold lay the queen, blood dripping from silk! her warrior husband king had conquered the north, diamonds and wealth, his victories brought forth, would richen his kingdom like never before, but loss of beloved wife made his heart sore, he held his sweet infant by his dead dear wife, his battle scars hurt but much less than his life, victorious yet he dropped to knees and wept, most beautiful she, he loved, forever slept, from the dark burning cinders of his lost love, his passion, undying zeal with treasure trove, he built a marble tomb to bear her remains, on shores of silver river from godly domains, river that holds a mirror to marble stones, even the bright full moon her absence bemoans, myriad stars spread on a canvass of black, perhaps witnessed thir romance now wish her back, five centuries have passed since that fateful day, beauty, elegance of tomb pave an ethereal way, whisper to lovers who watch with disbelief, that true love can defeat death, conquer grief! on love pilgrimage bare feet at Taj Mahal, marble tomb is now a temple of love ~ for all!
History of the event in brief Queen Mumtaz died giving birth to a girl child, on 17th June 1631. Shajahan, the king and she were so much in love, she stayed with him even during the war. She died in a tent from haemorrhage during delivery. The King commissioned the Taj Mahal made of pure Marble stones on the shores of river Yamuna! Silhouetted against the blue sky, Taj mahal stands to this day as a monument to Love! It was completed in 1653, but soon after the king was imprisoned by his own son and died lonely in a small cell. His body was then smuggled out by his loyal followers and buried next to his beloved queen in Taj mahal! Written 18/09/2020 2nd placement History of an Event contest sponsor William Kekaula
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Kauffman Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 3:16 PM
Krish, I thought I had left a comment on this marvelous tribute to love! You have encompassed the tragedy so thoughtfully and yet given us a picture of love that doesn't end. Many congratulations!
Radhakrishna Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 9:37 PM
Sam, appreciate your kind words! Visitors to the Taj should know the story behind the marble! Thanks!
Mitra Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 9:39 PM
Congrats Krish on your win....The Taj Mahal built for Queen Mumtaz a reminder that love is above all else.
Radhakrishna Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Thanks Carol! One has to visit the palace of Shah jahan to get the full impact of the event! Thanks for visiting and your comments!:)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 6:48 PM
Nice worded representations of your culture, Krish, sharing your relevant history to all, blessings my friend on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Radhakrishna Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 9:13 PM
Thank you William! I enjoyed writing this piece and those who have been to the Taj Mahal and the palace would see the poignancy of the event! great contest! Thanks for organising!!
Cunningham Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 1:35 AM
Love historical writes Krish and enjoyed this one, India is on my bucket list. I hear further lockdowns are on the cards. Tempted to stay in Turkey lol. Hope you're well and good luck in the contest. Tom
Radhakrishna Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Thanks Tom! You must visit India to see its glory! UK is slowly going into lockdown. I am working in the hospital today, and things quiet so far on Covid front.
Daniel Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 10:46 PM
You have beautifully penned about the pride of India in such wonderful lines, Krish:)
Radhakrishna Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 3:09 AM
Thank you Jo! A touching story and real history! Thanks for your lovely words. :) Krish
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