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A Historic Event

We arrived with expectations of triumph There were agonies, desperations and tears Coloring the hills with melancholy shades Erasing the imaginings of soldier’s anguish Embracing loss from the heights of passion Where worries win and misery invites pain To grasp the soul with a sense of forbode Whispering despair through breaths of air Filled with black dread and amber silence Created in the hearts of those who shall kill The sons of chaos who reach for a chance To divide and conquer – defeat the wretched Wickedness of those who long to succeed Reach victory along the front lines where Gettysburg soldiers are drifting along paths Of loss and sorrow, fears of all that has past And the tomorrows that are filled with knowing Death is a friend to those who defy it with Mercies murmuring and sighing, silencing Each breath of hope that finds its way to the Surface where there are only defeated desires Drenching the spirit with gloom that comes From losing every battle to the one who will Finally overthrow the light with darkest night The Battle of Gettysburg was fought July 1-3, 1863 in and around Gettysburg, Pennsylvania by Union and Confederate Soldiers during the American Civil War. This battle involved the largest number of deaths during the war and is often described as the war's turning point. The North won this battle with General Lee's forces. A Historic Event Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula September 18, 2020

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Date: 12/26/2020 10:39:00 PM
Gettysburg is a place we visited many times as a family. Your piece evokes the gut wrenching horrors which still loom over the battlefields, now in silent mourning. Kim
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Date: 9/29/2020 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations, Regina. Touching description of a tragedy with impressive choice of words. Best wishes, Mala
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Date: 9/24/2020 8:04:00 PM
I have driven the length of Gettysburg. Your poem is as large in dynamic power as the battlefield itself. War's synonym is tragedy. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/24/2020 6:43:00 PM
Your marvelous choice of words had won me over, Regina, passionately predisposes, blessings my friend on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 9/18/2020 10:58:00 PM
War is horrible anytime, Regina, you have captured it well:)
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Date: 9/18/2020 10:39:00 PM
Regina, Fine times were seldom that year. If ever a poet was a soldier's talisman, it would only come from their ghost in voice, or prophecy, or choice. -R
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