Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Diminished Hexaverse

A Hilltop Frolic

picnic on a hill
swept by summer's breeze
birds float by with ease
joy among the blooms
old fashioned perfumes

green everywhere
gold in our hair
soft bluebell skies
and whim's surprise

cardinals
hue rivals
love jewels

good times 
wind chimes

grass


Written on 6/16/2022
For: Diminished Hexaverse Contest 
Your Choice of Subject Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Eve Roper July 13, 2022 at 2:08 PM Big imagery , Evelyn, congratulations to a beautiful well deserved win. Blessings my friend Evelyn Judy Buehler July 13, 2022 at 3:52 PM Thank you for your kind comments, Eve. Have a lovely evening, Evelyn :)

John Watt July 12, 2022 at 9:50 PM Sounds like a pastoral summer day enjoying nature's sights, sounds, and aromas. Beautifully written, Evelyn, makes me want to pack a picnic lunch and join you. Warm congrats on your #1 win ~ John Evelyn Judy Buehler July 12, 2022 at 10:16 PM Thank you so much for your kind thoughts, John. I am so glad you enjoyed this. A picnic like this is not nearly as much fun alone. C'mon! :D

Connie Marcum Wong July 12, 2022 at 5:18 PM This poem is outstanding Evelyn! I adore wind chimes. My husband made me two different sets one large and one smaller. The larger almost sounds like Church bells. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving first place win. Blessings xxoo Evelyn Judy Buehler July 12, 2022 at 5:41 PM Thank you for your warm words of congratulations, Connie. I am so glad this poem struck a chord with you. Have a lovely evening. xxoo

Sam Kauffman July 11, 2022 at 1:14 PM What a beautiful portrait Evelyn - cardinals, bluebells, golden hair, green. The world is truly a technicolor feast for you that you beautifully share with us! Blessings my friend. Let me know when your next picnic is! Blessings! Evelyn Judy Buehler July 11, 2022 at 4:01 PM I'll be delighted to, Sam! Thank you so much for the smiles your words bring. Have a blessed week, my friend.

Karen Jones June 19, 2022 at 5:58 AM Fun to read good luck in the contest. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 19, 2022 at 9:59 AM Thank you, Karen. Happy Sunday.

Victor Buhagiar June 19, 2022 at 1:36 AM Lovely poem that reminds us of spring. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 19, 2022 at 9:58 AM The season contains so many joys. Thank you. Have a blessed Father's Day. :)

Gershon Wolf June 18, 2022 at 8:30 PM Images to treasure here!! (And no ants!). Have a blessed Sunday, Gershon Evelyn Judy Buehler June 19, 2022 at 9:56 AM Thank you for your valuable comment, Gershon. Happy Sunday and Father's Day! :)

L Milton Hankins June 18, 2022 at 6:46 PM A delightful picnic poem, Evelyn. I enjoyed it immensely. I know this form is not easy to compose! Evelyn Judy Buehler June 18, 2022 at 7:55 PM Thank you for your very nice remarks, Milton. I hope yours is a wonderful Father's Day, Evelyn :)