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A Hilltop Frolic

picnic on a hill swept by summer's breeze birds float by with ease joy among the blooms old fashioned perfumes green everywhere gold in our hair soft bluebell skies and whim's surprise cardinals hue rivals love jewels good times wind chimes grass Written on 6/16/2022 For: Diminished Hexaverse Contest Your Choice of Subject Poetry Contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/13/2022 2:08:00 PM

Big imagery , Evelyn, congratulations to a beautiful well deserved win. Blessings my friend

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/13/2022 3:52:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments, Eve. Have a lovely evening, Evelyn :)

John Watt

Date: 7/12/2022 9:50:00 PM

Sounds like a pastoral summer day enjoying nature's sights, sounds, and aromas. Beautifully written, Evelyn, makes me want to pack a picnic lunch and join you. Warm congrats on your #1 win ~ John

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/12/2022 10:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind thoughts, John. I am so glad you enjoyed this. A picnic like this is not nearly as much fun alone. C'mon! :D

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/12/2022 5:18:00 PM

This poem is outstanding Evelyn! I adore wind chimes. My husband made me two different sets one large and one smaller. The larger almost sounds like Church bells. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving first place win. Blessings xxoo

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/12/2022 5:41:00 PM

Thank you for your warm words of congratulations, Connie. I am so glad this poem struck a chord with you. Have a lovely evening. xxoo

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/11/2022 1:14:00 PM

What a beautiful portrait Evelyn - cardinals, bluebells, golden hair, green. The world is truly a technicolor feast for you that you beautifully share with us! Blessings my friend. Let me know when your next picnic is! Blessings!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/11/2022 4:01:00 PM

I'll be delighted to, Sam! Thank you so much for the smiles your words bring. Have a blessed week, my friend.