a hiku

u n h u r r I e d l y she primps as her new beau waits outside her door

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Howard Kerr

Date: 6/5/2025 1:52:00 AM

Well done, Andrea. Your usual immaculate standard. An narrative that engages the discerning reader Howard

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/4/2025 10:58:00 PM

Love the way you did this Andrea. Definitely tells the story ! Congrats

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/4/2025 4:43:00 PM

Great image! The “I” - she’s not in a hurry. She primps. He waits. She’s obviously confident!

Paige Hind

Date: 6/4/2025 12:29:00 PM

Cute!! <3

Tom Woody

Date: 6/4/2025 6:07:00 AM

Ooh does he know she's a bit of a diva? On the other hand, maybe she's dolling herself up extra special just for him. So many possibilities

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/4/2025 10:58:00 AM

I was thinking of calling this The Debutante and then realized maybe the debutante does not have a date when they have that special party. I like Diva. I should have used that title. Will change it after the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2025 2:22:00 AM

- A great one, Andrea - GL in the contest :) - hugs