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A Hero in a Man's Army

When he grows up he wants to be a hero in a man’s army He’ll join the war and fight the foe to foreign shores he’ll gladly go His sweetheart he will kiss farewell his parents’ hearts will truly swell He’ll proudly don his uniform and head off to the gath’ring storm But soon the smirk will leave his face when bursts of bombs and missiles chase him underground as scared as hell He'll lose control, begin to yell… Brave dreams give way to brutish war ~ no hero ever clamors for Iambic Tetrameter ~

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Date: 8/16/2024 4:39:00 PM
Fantabulous poem, Gershon. I've never been in a war zone, but all I know is it must be hellish. You've penned superbly. Shabbat Shalom. ~
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Date: 8/16/2024 4:54:00 PM
Appreciate your enthusiasm for this one, Regina. Sabbath Peace, Gershon
Date: 8/16/2024 2:52:00 PM
Reality sinks in. I am proud of the Americans who have fought for us. Thanks for this piece.
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Date: 8/15/2024 3:59:00 PM
It hits the spot with the silent majority, a group of Americans whose patriotism is quiet, but deep. Seeking to restore integrity to represent those who do not wish their sons and daughters to enter a war that isn't theirs! Let's keep the peace ~a piece of mind
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Date: 8/15/2024 7:16:00 PM
'quiet but deep.' Nice description of real love of country, Anaya. Thanks, Gershon
Date: 8/15/2024 9:50:00 AM
I’d say this is true. It is hard truth.
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Date: 8/15/2024 7:25:00 PM
The 'hard truth' is all I ever write! lol...
Date: 8/15/2024 5:55:00 AM
...to go where the brave dare not go...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/15/2024 7:25:00 PM
where even Philadelphia Eagles do not dare!
Date: 8/14/2024 9:39:00 PM
Sadly many are conned into thinking it’s just one big adventure and it rarely has the Hollywood ending they were hoping for. Tom
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