A Hero in a Man's Army

    When he grows up he wants to be
        a hero in a man’s army
    He’ll join the war and fight the foe
       to foreign shores he’ll gladly go

    His sweetheart he will kiss farewell
       his parents’ hearts will truly swell
    He’ll proudly don his uniform
       and head off to the gath’ring storm

    But soon the smirk will leave his face
       when bursts of bombs and missiles chase 
    him underground as scared as hell
       He'll lose control, begin to yell… 

    Brave dreams give way to brutish war
       ~ no hero ever clamors for  


              Iambic Tetrameter ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Elliott Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 4:39 PM
Fantabulous poem, Gershon. I've never been in a war zone, but all I know is it must be hellish. You've penned superbly. Shabbat Shalom. ~
Wolf Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 4:54 PM
Appreciate your enthusiasm for this one, Regina. Sabbath Peace, Gershon
Greenhough Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 2:52 PM
Reality sinks in. I am proud of the Americans who have fought for us. Thanks for this piece.
Anaya Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 3:59 PM
It hits the spot with the silent majority, a group of Americans whose patriotism is quiet, but deep. Seeking to restore integrity to represent those who do not wish their sons and daughters to enter a war that isn't theirs! Let's keep the peace ~a piece of mind
Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 7:16 PM
'quiet but deep.' Nice description of real love of country, Anaya. Thanks, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 9:50 AM
I’d say this is true. It is hard truth.
Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 7:25 PM
The 'hard truth' is all I ever write! lol...
Lawless Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 5:55 AM
...to go where the brave dare not go...
Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 7:25 PM
where even Philadelphia Eagles do not dare!
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2024 at 9:39 PM
Sadly many are conned into thinking it’s just one big adventure and it rarely has the Hollywood ending they were hoping for. Tom
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