A Hearty Aroma

A hearty soup's aroma wafts its way over the desolation, the barren tundra where bones shatter fingers crack toes burn

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/1/2020 3:44:00 PM

Love soup and PS too... the writers inspire my heart and soul with their pens in so many exquisite colors, painting hues of brilliant lights across the soup's rainbow of joyful noise! Your poem is a blessing to my heart, Gershon. God bless you always

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2020 5:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Regina, for the uplifting words. May God shine his countenance upon you. ~ Gershon

J. Summers

Date: 12/1/2020 9:22:00 AM

Mmm mmm good!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2020 3:23:00 PM

Get yourself a heavy-duty straw, and you can drink this poem! lol. Thanks, J. Summers! :) gw

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2020 5:05:00 AM

We are on the tundra and this soup makes our day. We had actual soup yesterday made with beef and many vegetables so we would have our Vitamins and protein. Thanks for dropping by my page. This fall has been so full of throat cutting and back stabbing now another set are on their way in to do their damage but the news media will love them. Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2020 3:27:00 PM

As long as your bones don't shatter, don't worry about the new media. Their fingers are already cracked! lol. Thanks, Sara.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/30/2020 7:02:00 PM

Your metaphoric write has me picturing a stream of water attempting to revive a desert.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/30/2020 7:26:00 PM

Ah, but a very special stream of water -- hearty soup!! Nothing like it! ~ Cameron the Camel