A Heart of Stone

Like gold gilt on a pagan idol; under the bling lies a heart of stone. For you abruptly abandoned me; though you swore, I'd never be alone. All of my hopes and dreams died within the periphery of your disdain. And wounded by your lies and deceit; I struggled to justify my pain. You had me believe in our future, but that was merely part of your plan. For reneging on promises made; you morphed into a shell of a man. Love was reduced to mere memories after passion's flame flickered out. And depression devastated me; when I learned what you were all about.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/27/2018 11:31:00 AM
Wow, again your opening lines offer spectacular imagery : "Like gold-leaf on a pagan idol under the bling lies a heart of stone." Great poem, Emile.
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Date: 5/1/2015 2:26:00 PM
the heartache is plain to see Emile - your pen weeps tears instead of ink:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2015 3:28:00 PM
I do nothing special Emile - I just reciprocate to of those that comment on my work and try and comment and encourage others :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/1/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, for all you've done and continue to do. Emile.
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