A Heart of a Poet

Unique and gripping
The journey of art and craft
Souls beyond limits.
Heart of a poet if stained
Pen on paper peels off pain.


May 29th,  2018
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Marjan Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Such a good poetry. Best wishes for you. Regards, Sheikh Shadi Marjan
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Thank you so much Shadi for your visit and generous comment! My pleasure! Welcome to PS! Stay safe and blessed always.
Smith Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 12:42 PM
A terrific pearl in such few words Besma, well done,,,
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Thank you so much Charlie for your generous appreciation! My pleasure!
Williams Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 6:12 AM
Another gem from your Soulful Pen dear Besma,I particularly love the last two lines. A definite fave for me ....Maria hugs
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 10:04 AM
You are showering me with kind and sweet words.. Your praising is every poet's reward! You are an ardent lover of words! Bunches of thanks and love dear Maria. Stay safe.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Hello Besma,a lovely poem.A nice poem about poets. I enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:28 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed my write. Thank you so much Darlene for your appreciative and lovely comment. Stay safe.
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 12:54 PM
- A beautiful and true thought you've put on your paper, Besma :) - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 5:24 PM
Thank you so much dear Sunshine for your generous feedback! Elated and humbled! Stay safe.
Ashley Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 10:12 PM
Yes, dear Besma, so much truth and beauty shines, loves and weeps from your soulful poetic pen. A heart of a poet surrenders emotion with the poet's luxurious freedom of self expression. 'Souls beyond limits', indeed! Always reaching and searching deeper, farther, higher in our 'journey of art and craft'. Your artistic heart glows with pulsing poetry my lovely friend. Warmest wishes and love.. ~Susan
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 7:09 AM
A heart of a poet, a meticulous taste for fine words, a generous soul rewarding in profusion and giving value to the world of words! A soul beyond limits dear Susan! I write words from the heart and you are one of the few who are on the path of my heart.. Always with a great pleasure I embrace your visits and treasure your genuine and generous words..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Thank you for sharing the passion of creative writing.. Shine and stay blessed dear Susan.
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Lovely, Besma. And really, is there anyone who doesn't have a stain on their heart. We all have so much in common.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Dear Line, we are blessed with a noble voice that of poetry! We strive to thrive. A visit and an elating feedback brings joy to my soul. Thank you so much. Stay bright and blessed.
One Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 8:32 AM
You are so right, you said it perfectly.. You are a wise lady and a great poet..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 10:59 AM
Too much on my humble soul! It is kind of you to spill fine words on my write! I venerate your generous comment. Thank you so much Silent One. Shine and stay blessed.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 8:00 AM
This is perfect in it’s brevity. You have distilled the thought to it’s essence.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 10:54 AM
We are interdependent, we learn from each other on the path of poetry! Thank you so much, a visit and a feedback I do appreciate. Stay blessed Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Oh my, I just read Demetrios’s comment and I said almost the exact same thing. *lol* it seems your piece garnered the same response from us both. If I didn’t know myself better I would have charged myself with plagerism.
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May 31, 2018 at 6:45 AM
A depiction of a true poet and his struggle to express himself in writing, a task that is not easy at all! Very insightful and artful writing dearest Besma! Much loved its brevity and essence!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Your visits and insightful feedbacks are always an honour and a delight dear Demetrios.. Bunches of thanks for your uplifting comment that adds value to my humble work. Stay safe.
Pandit Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 6:22 AM
Very well said Besma..Unique and gripping..Souls beyond limits...you captured the essence of creativity in just a few words.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 10:46 AM
You are showering upon my humble write the essence of your beauty! Always a great joy to greet your visits and read your feedbacks. Deeply grateful dear Vijay. Stay tuned and blessed.
Cunningham Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 1:51 AM
It is indeed a journey Besma, and yes we can put our hearts, souls and indeed pain in our works. Tom
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 10:36 AM
I do appreciate your generous feedback.. It adds value to my write. Thank you so much Tom. Stay safe.
Shuff Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 8:55 PM
You understand Besma. The heart of the Poet.Beautifully written,good Tanka form
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Appreciating my write is a tremendous joy! Thank you so much for your visit and lovely feedback. Stay blessed.
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