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A Heart Misleaded

Met a guy who seemed perfect to me For a period in time my heart could not see He talked although his true feelings were not told Every word of his turned into one that was cold My heart could not take it so I set him free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2016 9:47:00 PM
EBONI, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/26/2016 5:11:00 PM
Eboni Croney, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/3/2015 7:54:00 PM
Eboni.. Enjoyed your "broken heart" valentine lines.. And I congratulate you on your lovely winning limerick!
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Date: 6/1/2015 6:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/27/2015 5:22:00 PM
Eboni, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/27/2015 10:19:00 AM
Eboni,, Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT
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Date: 2/21/2015 9:45:00 PM
Hi Eboni.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Poetry Soup is an awesome place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other gifted poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give one of the Contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more of your good writes in the days to come. Please take time to check me out, ok!
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Date: 2/21/2015 8:36:00 PM
Eboni, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/19/2015 5:50:00 PM
Eboni, you actually set yourself free. Good move my friend.
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Eboni Croney
Date: 2/19/2015 6:21:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 2/19/2015 5:38:00 PM
Eboni, you did the right thing,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Eboni Croney
Date: 2/19/2015 6:22:00 PM
Thanks for the welcome. Im new to letting people read my poetry. I usually don't share anything I write so I'm starting to become more open.
Date: 2/19/2015 3:58:00 PM
aww a sad limerick:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Eboni Croney
Date: 2/19/2015 4:26:00 PM
Thank you? I hope you liked it anyhow.