A Heart Misleaded

Met a guy who seemed perfect to me
For a period in time my heart could not see
He talked although his true feelings were not told
Every word of his turned into one that was cold
My heart could not take it so I set him free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 6, 2016 at 9:47 PM
EBONI, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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April 26, 2016 at 5:11 PM
Eboni Croney, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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June 1, 2015 at 6:32 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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May 27, 2015 at 5:22 PM
Eboni, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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May 27, 2015 at 10:19 AM
Eboni,, Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT
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February 21, 2015 at 8:36 PM
Eboni, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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February 19, 2015 at 5:50 PM
Eboni, you actually set yourself free. Good move my friend.
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February 19, 2015 at 6:21 PM
Thank you so much.
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February 19, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Eboni, you did the right thing,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Croney Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 6:22 PM
Thanks for the welcome. Im new to letting people read my poetry. I usually don't share anything I write so I'm starting to become more open.
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 3:58 PM
aww a sad limerick:-( Hugs Jan xx
Croney Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 4:26 PM
Thank you? I hope you liked it anyhow.
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