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A Hat Made Out of Thunder

Dreary skies above with their heavy load. A teardrop window is my eye on things. I dream of trippin' down the winding road. Where life is larger than it sometimes seems. Saying half a prayer 'bout sending some sun. Never getting signs of any wonder. Sometimes the spring rain has me on the run. And wearing a hat made out of thunder. The pressure is low and sits on my head. A natural vice with some lovely pain. Then going upstairs and jumping in bed. And falling asleep to the sound of rain. We all know what joy the sunshine can bring. If we can make it through this gloomy spring! date: 2/21/23

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Date: 3/3/2023 2:51:00 AM
"We all know what joy the sunshine can bring. If we can make it through this gloomy spring" - beautifully ended. Congratulations!
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Meru Groen
Date: 4/23/2023 7:36:00 AM
Thanks, Alex you are so kind with your great comments I really appreciate them, Meru.
Date: 3/2/2023 3:55:00 PM
I love your title, and also enjoy sleeping to the sound of rain, congratulations and thanks for entering my contest~
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Date: 2/23/2023 6:21:00 AM
I like this sonnet, Meru. There are some very poetic lines. "Where life is..., Saying half... and Wearing a hat... all great lines.
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Meru Groen
Date: 4/23/2023 7:43:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel, You appear to have a love and a knowledge of poetry, which makes your comment so kind and pleasing, I really appreciate it, Meru.

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