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A Hat Full

*Image of Ten Gallon Stetson by IBA.

A Hat Full

A cowboy with a ten-gallon hat,
Seen a spittoon and gave it a spat,
A girl screamed, "That's my vase!",
She then frowned in his face,
And stepped on his hat and made it flat.

2022 May 07
*1st Place*
High Noon
~~Joseph May: Judged 2022 May 08

RZ, HMS: 9,9,6,6,9.

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David Drowley May 11, 2022 at 3:44 PM Congratulations on your win! Serves them both right! William Kelii Kekaula May 11, 2022 at 4:21 PM Hehe, tit-for-tat, eh! Service with no smiles--'cept for mines, thanks, David, Aloha~William

Sotto Poet May 9, 2022 at 12:09 PM Congratulations on your win, William. Blessings my friend ( We still waiting for your $$contest evaluation.) William Kelii Kekaula May 9, 2022 at 12:42 PM I am truly indebted to you, Lasaad, and as per your query, a surprisingly pleasant twist of circumstances has caused for the delay my friend, Aloha~William

Alexis Y. May 9, 2022 at 10:06 AM Congratulations on your top win in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis William Kelii Kekaula May 9, 2022 at 10:17 AM Thanks, Alexis, for promptly stopping by, an honor in and of itself my friend, Aloha~William

Sara Kendrick May 9, 2022 at 4:31 AM Congrats on your winning work. Creative way to go for the contest. I would think both cowboy and girl walked away disgusted. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara William Kelii Kekaula May 9, 2022 at 9:32 AM A point well made, Sara, of the disappointing encounter via the limey version. I welcome your extolling and am glad to oblige my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex May 8, 2022 at 9:38 PM "ten-gallon hat" - Wow! And a very pleasantly revenging story. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula May 9, 2022 at 1:10 AM I am delighted by your laudation, Christuraj, and gratified amusement my friend, Aloha~William

Jan Allison May 8, 2022 at 12:11 PM very witty indeed, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx William Kelii Kekaula May 8, 2022 at 1:53 PM I am truly pleased, Jan, with your sensible conveyance o'er the frivolity my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith May 8, 2022 at 10:45 AM Congratulations on your win. Oh no not the hat. A fun write. Have a blessed day writing away....................... William Kelii Kekaula May 8, 2022 at 1:39 PM Alas, a sacrifice my dear, Paula, albeit, just for one's smile my friend, Aloha~William

Eve Roper May 8, 2022 at 10:35 AM hahahaha... this is so very good, William..Great picture of John Wayne, just a baby. Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend William Kelii Kekaula May 8, 2022 at 1:34 PM A chuckle confessed, Eve, gladdens my heart with much added thanks dear friend, Aloha~William

Anne E Sangster - K May 8, 2022 at 6:22 AM Congratulations Hilo on your first place win. A clever write indeed! Nice touch adding the picture of the Duke in a ten gallon hat. Cheers Anne :-) William Kelii Kekaula May 8, 2022 at 8:46 AM I am appreciative, Anne, for your laudation and generous expressions my friend, Aloha~William

Joseph May May 8, 2022 at 6:02 AM She shoewd him a hat trick, Very nicely done Hilo, Congrats on your win William Kelii Kekaula May 8, 2022 at 8:42 AM Thanks aplenty, Joseph, 'twas fun doing with a subtle brush on the laugh-o-meter my friend, Aloha~William

L Milton Hankins May 7, 2022 at 4:57 PM Oh my, she could have done nothing to insult him more! William Kelii Kekaula May 7, 2022 at 5:11 PM Milt, tho' it leans more sensical than laughable, eh, c'est la vie mon ami, Aloha~William