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A Handful of Haiku: Autumn

I Summer has moved out Of temporary lodgings Fall's lease begins II Harvest moon, frosty Nights, leaves changing hues to show Autumn's here again

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Susan Ashley

Date: 9/26/2022 11:36:00 AM

Dear Jim, your pair of haiku portray the transition of summer to Autumn so beautifully. I love the Fall season, and this line especially; "Harvest moon, frosty".. your imagery speaks to my soul. Splendid haiku, my friend.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/26/2022 6:30:00 PM

Indeed! :)

Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/26/2022 1:50:00 PM

Thanks, Susan. So now I can add "soul speak" to my list of talents? Awesome!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2022 8:36:00 PM

clever Ku set!

Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/26/2022 10:55:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/25/2022 2:56:00 PM

'temporary lodgings' says it all to me. Thanks, Jim.

Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/26/2022 10:55:00 AM

Yes, G. Seems as if just when we start to really complain about the heat...it's moved on. Thanks.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2022 12:11:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your Autumn Haiku. Autumn is something to talk about isn't it. We have had so much heat this summer that a little cool is surely welcomed. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/24/2022 12:29:00 PM

Thank you, Sara, and you're very welcome.