A Halloween Tale

If you’re in the mood for a tale
Please come sit with me a spell

I’ll spin a yarn of sheer delight
Concerning October’s final night

Children dress up in their suits
Parents thinking, “Oh so cute”

Cauldron stirred by a giant spoon 
Evil laughter echoes from the room

Goblins called to do their deed
As Vampires prepare to feed

I remember once when I was a boy
My excited heart raced with joy

My friends and I took to the streets
Filling bags with precious treats

All night long running around
Till we hit every house in town

One final house on Graveyard Hill
Suddenly the night was frozen still

As we headed up the crooked path
We heard the evil witches laugh

Too scared to run too scared to stay
Too scared to think too scared to pray

The Iron Gate slammed with a clatter
Suddenly everything was the matter

Lightening crackled in the sky
As across the moon an owl did fly

A silhouette made not a sound
As a fog started to cover the ground

I thought of what my sister had said
“Graveyard Hill is where they keep the dead”

The silhouette stepped through the door
Said, “Greedy children want some more”

Suddenly monsters came out of the brush
As our screams echoed in the midnight hush

Those monsters eyes danced with delight
As they delivered us to the witch that night

As we all prepared to meet our ends
It was just my sister and her friends
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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George   Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 1:04 AM
I could see the whole thing. I am still laughing. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carol's contest, Michael. Love, Lainie
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October 2, 2009 at 2:00 PM
You are on quite a roll in these contests--a tribute to your talent. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. Enjoy your honor. Karen
Richards Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 12:06 PM
Congratulations, Michael. I enjoyed reading this one again!! Great job!! ~ Love, Carrie
Moreno Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 11:34 AM
Michael, congratulations on your success in the contest...Raul
Brown Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations and thank you for taking part in my contest Michael. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 12:47 PM
Michael, Thank you for entering my contest. Love, Carol
Bellefleur Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 7:44 AM
I love this - am a big fan of horror and Halloween! wonderful story as I am sure we all have of Halloween past..
Sliger Avatar
October 23, 2008 at 6:00 AM
WOW! Thats really good! The sense of suspense and conclusion definitely threw me for a loop. ^_^
Bruso Avatar
October 20, 2008 at 1:01 PM
Wickedly funny! I'm still chuckling over the last line! Great job! Lonnie
Bristow Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 11:50 AM
Great write.....you've inspired me to write something ghoulish for halloween as well!!
Hickman Avatar
October 18, 2008 at 10:32 AM
a very very well written tale with wonderful imagery with a surprising end to which delighted me and brought back similar memories of the past,,blessings,,,and Thank You for reading and commenting on my poem...Cecil
Kilby Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:58 AM
a very nice couplet :P i've been trying to learn that style :P
La France Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 4:15 PM
Hello... I like this poem .. brings back some halloween memories.. thanks for your comments on my poem.. soft like mittens... constance
Austin Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 3:21 PM
Yes! This is right in the spirit. Things haven't changed much where I live. They come in bus loads. Enjoyed. Yep, Zeus was the big cheese on Olympus, Jupiter in the Roman. I wrote a chap book called Sibyl some years ago, and am inflicting it on anyone with which it communicates. Thanks for reading. Love, daver
Jackson Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 12:58 PM
cute poem...takes me back to another time ....thanks for sharing I will be looking for the poem you had mentioned
Anos Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 6:43 AM
hehehe! Scary stuff michael! Full of memories and childlike delights for a hallows eve. Brgds. george
Grigoriadis Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 5:06 AM
Great story ! Nicel work Michael. Regards and thank you. Constantinos
Reynolds Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 4:37 AM
HA! Right on! Halloween is a very very close second with me (behind Christmas) as i just LOVE everything about it! We just decorated lastnight, and I am so happy! Woohoo! Great poem, Mike, love Kristin
Rider Avatar
October 11, 2008 at 10:06 PM
My Dad did that one year and was beat over the head numerous times with a treat bag that he insists had more apples in it than candy! Thank you for the memories and smiles! ~Tru~
Spence Sr Avatar
October 11, 2008 at 3:51 PM
She certainly pulled a fast one on you! This is really funny. Hey, I would not have waited around to find out the real story. There would have been a clear path of fire and smoke blazing down the hill. Well, I guest that would have spoiled the fun now, wouldn’t it? Great job! ~Joseph
Stella Avatar
October 11, 2008 at 10:04 AM
LOL this reminded of me and brother and sisters hitting the town I was dressed up as aunt jaminea that lady on the syrup bottle took like a week to get the black shoe polish off tho lol great write and imagery mike see your sister got ya in the end lol thanks for sharing dear friend hugs
Richards Avatar
October 11, 2008 at 9:41 AM
I may be a grown up......but I've never "grown up"!! I still love Halloween, it's the best....dressing up and being scared! Your sister sounded like my big brother...always looking for ways to scare me! Cute poem, Michael!
Winter Avatar
October 11, 2008 at 7:05 AM
Ha ha! Excellent ending! I love Halloween, and your poem, along with a few others here, have so put me in the spirit of the holiday. This was awesome Michael. Just the lightness and high spirit of fun I needed. Well done! Love, Shar
Buys Avatar
October 11, 2008 at 6:55 AM
Superb atmosphere, great story and so very well written. Had to chuckle at the ending. A fine poem indeed. Love Heidie
Torres Avatar
October 11, 2008 at 6:22 AM
Michael this was so funny. I enjoyed every bit of it. Excellent write, I dedicated one of my latest poems to you and John and my parents. Michael this has to be one of if not the best halloween poem I have read and the ending was great. God bless you my brother and Toni and your precious family Michael
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