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Author's Notes:  Co-Authored Halloween poem with Liam McDaid and myself on October 13, 2014. (Contest Entry for Halloween Co-Writes, 5 Nov 14, Diane Locksley - Sponsor)

Gary Bateman, October 18, 2014 (Free Verse poetic format)

Categories:  allegory, courage, emotions, fantasy, feelings, magic, and poetry.

One dark and dreary night many, many moons ago myself and a friend coming home from the local disco no names mentioned smiling . . . and in the far distance we could see and hear three girls laughing and giggling and having fun This was Halloween Night or All Hallows' Eve . . . and so we climbed up the nearest evergreen barely breathing, holding our breaths . . . so they would not hear us and sense our presence the one directly in the middle as they neared us in passing a quick clip at the back of the head said do you want to hear the screams roaring out of them away hammer and tongs up the road We could hear them shouting and carrying on . . . I'm sure that place is haunted to this day they tell their story claiming it to be real well better still was to come for both of us laughing our hearts out giggling like madmen I felt like a gruesome hand of ice just touched me . . . the tremors ran down my spine jolting me in a most terrible way almost felt like a gripping sensation on my shoulder almost falling of the tree with a roar My good friend starting screaming making it worse . . . saying somebody must of touched us the same time we looked at each other and made a race to get home just got really spooked and ran the whole 3 miles home in a record time ever saying my holy prayers every stroll of the way . . . a most hideous and macabre thought -- a ghost touched me as the cold ran right through me chilling me to the bone never was I as glad to see holy water in the house I bless myself for being lucky never ever have I pulled such a prank from that night to this . . . It backfired on us so we chose never to say a word about it ever again!! And now we can only say: BOO!! BOO!! BOO!! And Happy Halloween!! Liam McDaid and Gary Bateman, Free Verse Collaboration (October 13, 2014) (Contest Entry for Halloween Co-Writes, 5 Nov 14, Diane Locksley - Sponsor)

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Date: 11/6/2014 12:20:00 PM
- I'm a little late ..... But, I will congratulate you with a 4th place Gary and Liam - a great winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/7/2014 6:45:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise!! I'm just glad we had the opportunity to submit our joint write here in the contest. I am continually amazed at the very high quality of the large number of writers here in PoetrySoup. I learn something every time I read someone else's poetry!! And I have learned a great deal so far. Have a great weekend!! Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 11/5/2014 4:02:00 AM
reading all your comments dear friends heartfelt warm beautiful smiling thank you all deeply
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/7/2014 6:47:00 AM
Liam My Mate . . . The Leprechaun Choir is singing for us too here!! Cheers, Gary
Date: 11/4/2014 10:42:00 PM
Congrats Gary on this fine co write with liam...cheers
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/5/2014 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Tim!! More to come in the future!! Cheers, Gary
Date: 11/4/2014 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations Gary. I'm glad to see this poem on the winning list.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/4/2014 9:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Brenda . . . Glad you enjoyed it!! Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 11/4/2014 1:40:00 PM
Many congrats Gary and Liam on this chilling Halloween write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/4/2014 9:13:00 PM
Thanks Jan!! And Congrats to you as well!! Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 11/4/2014 1:24:00 PM
I got the chills when the ghost touched the boy's shoulder. Excellent story told in verse. Congratulations on your win!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/4/2014 9:16:00 PM
Thanks Diane, I know that Liam and I are thrilled that our poem placed in the contest. (A lot of very fine writers in the group!!) Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 10/29/2014 3:19:00 PM
I missed this one earlier...love it! I can see why you never talked about it. Great one, Gary and Liam.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/1/2014 6:36:00 PM
Thanks ML!! We are sooooo secretive!! Best!! Gary
Date: 10/22/2014 3:07:00 AM
- An exciting and skillfully written Halloween poem /story,Gary! - We should be careful about demons, spirits and ghosts on a Halloween night - BOo ! - Booo! -Legenden Says that powerful ancient forces of evil conveyed their powers to allow one day a year where they could be unleashed on the world - a time when the dream plane between life and death is weakened as demons, spirits, ghosts and other creatures can have catastrophic easier access to this world - Luck in the contest! - // Anne-Lise
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/22/2014 9:07:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise from both Liam and me!! You are certainly right about the thin veil separating the dream plane between life and death. I live an hour's drive here in Germany from the Brocken Summit in the Harz which was Goethe's focus with his Dance of the Witches in Faust. Ghost, Witches, Goblins BOO!! Halloween is Close!! Gary
Date: 10/18/2014 4:37:00 PM
Ah, I thought I read this. Congratulations on the two of you.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/18/2014 5:19:00 PM
You did Brenda. Turns out we both have to co-authored works posted, especially if you enter a contest calling for such. We'll see if the ghost and goblins shine happily on us. Best!! Gary
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/18/2014 5:14:00 PM
You did Brenda. Turns out we both have to co-authored works posted, especially if you enter a contest calling for such. We'll see if the ghost and goblins shine happily on us. Best!! Gary
Date: 10/18/2014 4:21:00 PM
Loved it the second time around as well...good luck guys
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/18/2014 5:18:00 PM
Thanks Tim!! We'll see what happens. Cheers, Gary

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