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A Halloween Story

One dark and dreary night many, many moons ago
myself and a friend coming home from the local disco
no names mentioned smiling . . .
and in the far distance we could see and hear three girls
laughing and giggling and having fun 

This was Halloween Night or All Hallows' Eve . . .
and so we climbed up the nearest evergreen 
barely breathing, holding our breaths . . .
so they would not hear us and sense our presence
the one directly in the middle as they neared us
in passing a quick clip at the back of the head said 
do you want to hear the screams roaring out of
them away hammer and tongs up the road

We could hear them shouting and carrying on . . .
I'm sure that place is haunted
to this day they tell their story claiming it to be real
well better still was to come for both of us 
laughing our hearts out giggling like madmen
 
I felt like a gruesome hand of ice just touched me . . .  
the tremors ran down my spine
jolting me in a most terrible way
almost felt like a gripping sensation on my shoulder 
almost falling of the tree with a roar
 
My good friend starting screaming making it worse . . . 
saying somebody must of touched us the same time
we looked at each other and made a race to get home 
just got really spooked and ran the whole 3 miles home 
in a record time ever saying my holy prayers every stroll of the way . . .
a most hideous and macabre thought -- a ghost touched me 
as the cold ran right through me chilling me to the bone
never was I as glad to see holy water in the house 
I bless myself for being lucky  
never ever have I pulled such a prank 
from that night to this . . .
 
It backfired on us so we chose never to say
a word about it ever again!!
And now we can only say: BOO!! BOO!! BOO!!
And Happy Halloween!!
 
Liam McDaid and Gary Bateman, Free Verse Collaboration (October 13, 2014)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/6/2014 12:21:00 PM
- I'm a little late ..... But, I will congratulate you with a 4th place Liam and Gary - a great winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/6/2014 12:24:00 PM
thank you ever so kindly anne lise dear friend wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 11/4/2014 10:44:00 PM
Congrats liam on this tremendous piece co written with Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/5/2014 3:45:00 AM
thank you tim for the amazing beautiful comment heartfelt pal
Date: 11/4/2014 7:20:00 PM
Congratulations Liam. Glad to see your poem was on a winning list.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 7:28:00 PM
brenda thank you ever so kindly deeply appreciated dear friend
Date: 11/4/2014 1:38:00 PM
Great chilling Halloween co-write Gary and Liam:-) Many congrats on your win. Hugs Jan xx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 2:00:00 PM
ah jan thank you kindly dear pal for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated god bless
Date: 11/4/2014 1:25:00 PM
I got the chills when the ghost touched the boy's shoulder. Excellent story told in verse. Congratulations on your win!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 1:56:00 PM
thank you diane for a truly wonderful comment smiling bless you
Date: 10/22/2014 3:06:00 AM
- An exciting and skillfully written Halloween poem /story, Liam! - We should be careful about demons, spirits and ghosts on a Halloween night - BOo ! - Booo! -Legenden Says that powerful ancient forces of evil conveyed their powers to allow one day a year where they could be unleashed on the world - a time when the dream plane between life and death is weakened as demons, spirits, ghosts and other creatures can have catastrophic easier access to this world - Luck in the contest! - // Anne-Lise
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/22/2014 4:05:00 AM
boo boo just churning the pot anne lise as we speak just adding my last frog hope this magic works because all i want to do for halloween is fly into the night a lost soul when the gates above open i am making a dive for it ha ha wonderful comment dear friend
Date: 10/18/2014 4:53:00 AM
Hi Liam, Could you make sure Gary posts this poem and enters it too? If a poem wins, I want each writer to get credit for the win. Thank you and have a fun Halloween.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/18/2014 3:12:00 PM
Diane, Liam e-mailed me separately on this. I am in the process of getting this work co-posted under my name and then will access the Contest Site. My post will mirror mimic Liam's. This should do it -- hopefully. Cheers, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/18/2014 7:14:00 AM
yeah i will get on to gary straight away thank you ever so kindly happy halloween boooooo
Date: 10/17/2014 6:21:00 PM
This is quite a terrifying tale that you two have written here. I always enjoy these kinds of stories and yours did not disappoint! Great work! Good luck to you both!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/18/2014 3:32:00 PM
Kelly, Thanks!! I know that both Liam and I admire your poems greatly. Glad to oblige with some terrifying words here. Cheers, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/17/2014 6:45:00 PM
smiling kelly thank you kindly dear friend truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 10/14/2014 7:54:00 PM
Luckily you didn't fall from the tree...now that would have hurt///wonderful
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 8:07:00 PM
oh but my friend did squeeling tim smiling pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend thank you kindly
Date: 10/14/2014 10:45:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. Booo : )
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/14/2014 2:40:00 PM
Charmaine . . . BOO! BOO! BOO! Cheers, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 11:12:00 AM
smiling with garrys help this really drew amazing for me boo to you too charmaine
Date: 10/14/2014 3:24:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 3:30:00 AM
ravi dear friend thank you for the kind very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 10/13/2014 9:28:00 PM
Nice work Gary and Liam. I enjoyed reading this immensely. It was a good Halloween story.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/14/2014 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Brenda . . . It's a pleasure working with Liam!! Cheers, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/13/2014 10:20:00 PM
brenda dear friend truly wonderful comment god bless

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