A Halloween Story

One dark and dreary night many, many moons ago
myself and a friend coming home from the local disco
no names mentioned smiling . . .
and in the far distance we could see and hear three girls
laughing and giggling and having fun 

This was Halloween Night or All Hallows' Eve . . .
and so we climbed up the nearest evergreen 
barely breathing, holding our breaths . . .
so they would not hear us and sense our presence
the one directly in the middle as they neared us
in passing a quick clip at the back of the head said 
do you want to hear the screams roaring out of
them away hammer and tongs up the road

We could hear them shouting and carrying on . . .
I'm sure that place is haunted
to this day they tell their story claiming it to be real
well better still was to come for both of us 
laughing our hearts out giggling like madmen
 
I felt like a gruesome hand of ice just touched me . . .  
the tremors ran down my spine
jolting me in a most terrible way
almost felt like a gripping sensation on my shoulder 
almost falling of the tree with a roar
 
My good friend starting screaming making it worse . . . 
saying somebody must of touched us the same time
we looked at each other and made a race to get home 
just got really spooked and ran the whole 3 miles home 
in a record time ever saying my holy prayers every stroll of the way . . .
a most hideous and macabre thought -- a ghost touched me 
as the cold ran right through me chilling me to the bone
never was I as glad to see holy water in the house 
I bless myself for being lucky  
never ever have I pulled such a prank 
from that night to this . . .
 
It backfired on us so we chose never to say
a word about it ever again!!
And now we can only say: BOO!! BOO!! BOO!!
And Happy Halloween!!
 
Liam McDaid and Gary Bateman, Free Verse Collaboration (October 13, 2014)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Andresen Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 12:21 PM
- I'm a little late ..... But, I will congratulate you with a 4th place Liam and Gary - a great winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 12:24 PM
thank you ever so kindly anne lise dear friend wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you
Smith Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 10:44 PM
Congrats liam on this tremendous piece co written with Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 3:45 AM
thank you tim for the amazing beautiful comment heartfelt pal
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Congratulations Liam. Glad to see your poem was on a winning list.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 7:28 PM
brenda thank you ever so kindly deeply appreciated dear friend
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 1:38 PM
Great chilling Halloween co-write Gary and Liam:-) Many congrats on your win. Hugs Jan xx
Mcdaid Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 2:00 PM
ah jan thank you kindly dear pal for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated god bless
Locksley Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 1:25 PM
I got the chills when the ghost touched the boy's shoulder. Excellent story told in verse. Congratulations on your win!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 1:56 PM
thank you diane for a truly wonderful comment smiling bless you
Andresen Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 3:06 AM
- An exciting and skillfully written Halloween poem /story, Liam! - We should be careful about demons, spirits and ghosts on a Halloween night - BOo ! - Booo! -Legenden Says that powerful ancient forces of evil conveyed their powers to allow one day a year where they could be unleashed on the world - a time when the dream plane between life and death is weakened as demons, spirits, ghosts and other creatures can have catastrophic easier access to this world - Luck in the contest! - // Anne-Lise
Mcdaid Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 4:05 AM
boo boo just churning the pot anne lise as we speak just adding my last frog hope this magic works because all i want to do for halloween is fly into the night a lost soul when the gates above open i am making a dive for it ha ha wonderful comment dear friend
Locksley Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 4:53 AM
Hi Liam, Could you make sure Gary posts this poem and enters it too? If a poem wins, I want each writer to get credit for the win. Thank you and have a fun Halloween.
Bateman Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 3:12 PM
Diane, Liam e-mailed me separately on this. I am in the process of getting this work co-posted under my name and then will access the Contest Site. My post will mirror mimic Liam's. This should do it -- hopefully. Cheers, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 7:14 AM
yeah i will get on to gary straight away thank you ever so kindly happy halloween boooooo
Deschler Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 6:21 PM
This is quite a terrifying tale that you two have written here. I always enjoy these kinds of stories and yours did not disappoint! Great work! Good luck to you both!
Bateman Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 3:32 PM
Kelly, Thanks!! I know that both Liam and I admire your poems greatly. Glad to oblige with some terrifying words here. Cheers, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 6:45 PM
smiling kelly thank you kindly dear friend truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Smith Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 7:54 PM
Luckily you didn't fall from the tree...now that would have hurt///wonderful
Mcdaid Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:07 PM
oh but my friend did squeeling tim smiling pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend thank you kindly
Chircop Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 10:45 AM
I really enjoyed this. Booo : )
Bateman Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 2:40 PM
Charmaine . . . BOO! BOO! BOO! Cheers, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 11:12 AM
smiling with garrys help this really drew amazing for me boo to you too charmaine
Sathasivam Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:24 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Mcdaid Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:30 AM
ravi dear friend thank you for the kind very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 9:28 PM
Nice work Gary and Liam. I enjoyed reading this immensely. It was a good Halloween story.
Bateman Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 2:39 PM
Thanks Brenda . . . It's a pleasure working with Liam!! Cheers, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 10:20 PM
brenda dear friend truly wonderful comment god bless
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