A Halloween Dream


Occasionally I dream.
Black ominous spots as my eyes close.
A dream I never remember,
A dream I don't want to remember.
For when I do I cringe with fear,
Sit in a corner of my darkened room,
Trying unsuccessfully to forget.

Fitful recurring dream,
That leaves the palate dry,
Devoid of savored zest,
Flat as unleavened bread.
Murky shadows in a dark room,
Swirling, gasping, mutely roaring,
Ugly, brusque, dyspeptic, and morose.
It gyrates meaninglessly in the void,

A menacing, unpleasant stench
That eventually dissolves into nothingness.
A dream orchestrated to confuse,
Meant to gradually unhinge the mind.
So fatigued, I sleep and dream.
The rest I am awake to face
The terrors of the night.
Surrounded by four impenetrable walls.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 6:28 PM
A frightful dream in our sleep in the night often leaves us fatigued in the day ! Beautifully composed Victor !
Kiser Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 3:36 PM
Eerie, very well crafted of this dream though; hope you're okay afterwards.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Spooky!
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 12:33 PM
- After scary dreams one feels exhausted ... they become so alive ... and we can not completely let go of them ... - Sweet dreams we quickly forget ... not fair :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 1:30 AM
Ah! Nightmares, unforgettable indeed, well penned emotions here, Victor:)
Horsman Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 8:25 PM
scary stuff Victor, Yet the poetry inspiring.
Calasibetta Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 4:47 PM
Hi Victor, I hope it isn't true; and that you created this for Halloween.Dreams like that seem to be indelible.~ Great write! Blessings, Paulette
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 3:50 PM
Those nightmares read like they are horrible. My mother(adopted) used to dream and would wake the whole household up screaming. She told me once she would dream that she was holding her baby and when she looked at her she would see she was dead. Her child died at 9 months old from pneumonia. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Ball Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 2:56 PM
I usually don't remember my dreams but when I was a child I had nightmares all the time. I was terrified of the dark and wouldn't go into a room without first slipping my hand around the corner and turning on the light. Good stuff here Victor. Great imagery and emotion. God Bless, JB
Roper Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 1:57 PM
I usually have them often , very good write
Poet Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 1:33 PM
Very scary dream, Victor, it’s right on time for Halloween, it makes you leave the lights on all night.
Buehler Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 10:50 AM
A scary Halloween verse that provides chills in abundance. Great writing, Victor. :)
Skelly Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 10:01 AM
The horror of night terrors..Creepy...Delice
Pandit Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 4:41 AM
Apt for Halloween, but a dream that is a nightmare. I like the way you took your first line on a highly descriptive journey evoking relevant emotions, Victor. Not everyone can do that.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 1:58 AM
I would scream if I had a dream like that Victor, very scary and right on theme for halloween… Belle
Seeker Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 1:31 AM
Fear (thought forms) disappears when we look it in the eye!
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 1:00 AM
A frightening dream for sure, makes you want to sleep with the light on. Tom
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