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A Haiku Writes Itself

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Ukiyo
Origin: Japanese
Definition: Literally translates to “the floating world”; Living in the moment, detached from the bothers of life.

Wabi-Sabi
Definition: A Japanese concept and art of imperfect beauty; The discovery of beauty within the imperfections of life and art; the acceptance of the cycle of life and death

~words reflect ripples ~across a pond of dreaming ~syllables falter ~ ukiyo wabi-sabi ~ a thought feather floating down ~ haiku writes itself

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Jim Slaughter

Date: 1/28/2024 10:29:00 AM

Love these, Suzanne. One of my favorite forms...and not just because they require less effort on my part.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/29/2024 5:03:00 PM

Hi Jim: Yes I like Haiku. I should write more of them. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 8:48:00 PM

This is really cool, Suzanne. Thanks for visiting my poetry today

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/29/2024 5:01:00 PM

Thanks Andrea Hope you & your hubby are doing OK. Hugs, SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2023 6:09:00 AM

Creative way to go with this one. I enjoyed reading your informative work and explanation. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara K..I hope this holiday season is a wonderful time for you and your family.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/17/2023 9:54:00 AM

Thanks Sara: I do appreciate your visit and thoughtful comment. Hugs, SuZ

Karen Jones

Date: 10/8/2023 5:28:00 PM

Simple words conveying complicated images. Rippling water. How do you explain this to a blind person? If anyone can it is you. Great imagery and amazing beautiful words!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/8/2023 6:06:00 PM

Thanks so much Karen: I love finding this kind of info on what words mean in other languages and using it for a poem. Your visit has cheered me up. SuZ

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/2/2023 4:56:00 AM

Much depth you convey in just a few words. Lovely poems, SuZ.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/8/2023 5:56:00 PM

Thanks Vijay:I appreciated your visit. I have been down in the dumps because my little fur baby has gone to the rainbow bridge. Hope all is well in your world. Best, SuZ

Ink Empress

Date: 9/8/2023 3:23:00 AM

Words reflect ripples, how poetic and deep is that. I love how you’ve woven your haiku in such a dreamy and captivating manner that would get any reader to feel the words you’ve woven here in sheer eloquence. A thought feather floating as haiku writes itself so well delivered. Profound and beautiful. Loved reading this.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/8/2023 3:45:00 AM

Thanks Empress.……for your very thoughtful comment, I guess i mean that literally [after much thought] a haiku writes itself. Have a brilliant day. SuZ

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/6/2023 1:44:00 PM

In thinking of a feather..falling or floating Down.' Have you ever considered a political Career Suz? I mean like when inflattion or Gdp is spoken of as if its rising by 001% or something??? In intricate description Which should make people happy..But it Dosen't yet thulis Haiku does.' Be well be Blessed!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/8/2023 3:55:00 AM

Dear Joe. The thought of becoming a politician has never crossed my mind. Living a lie each day is the most abhorrent state a soul could be in. I’d rather delude myself that I can write a halfway decent poem lol …. Be well. Smile often. SuZ

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/6/2023 7:42:00 AM

A beautiful Haiku Suzanne with great skill and artistry. So clever. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2023 6:12:00 AM

I believe the best ones do. Thought provoking, I like it.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/8/2023 3:56:00 AM

Hi Rick: Thanks for you comment and visit. It means a lot. SuZ

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/4/2023 6:04:00 PM

My friend I certainly agree with my good friend Sotto as this is clearly a remarkable poem. To pack so much in such few words is amazing. I very rarely ever fav haiku but I fav this one because it is truly a great poem.. God bless you,

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/5/2023 5:50:00 AM

I am so honored by your FAV, Robert, and the high praise you and Sotto have given this poem. I really appreciate your encouraging words. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/30/2023 9:07:00 AM

An amazing/wonderful Haiku write/pretty picture. "Love It" Have a great/blessed day writing away.............................

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/30/2023 7:21:00 AM

Amazing and so emotional !I Loved all of the poignant nuances you created here SuZ ! Hugs, Susan :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/5/2023 5:47:00 AM

Dear Susan: I am so happy you enjoyed reading this. I appreciate your visit. SuZ

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/22/2023 12:36:00 PM

This is quite beautiful, very well penned!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/5/2023 5:46:00 AM

Thanks Michelle: I appreciate you stopping by and leaving this lovely comment. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2023 5:08:00 PM

Wow. These are stunning

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/21/2023 5:31:00 PM

Hi Andie: Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed. SuZ

Silent One

Date: 8/21/2023 10:19:00 AM

Its nice to see a haiku done in the right way and you have done that perfectly here... So much imagery in only a few words... your haiku takes the reader on their own vivid journey...

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/21/2023 11:00:00 AM

I am so happy you enjoyed reading this one, S1 My first poem in quite a while. PS always inspires me and the friends in poetry I have found here. Glad to see a familiar name. SuZ

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/20/2023 6:27:00 PM

These are truly beautiful, and they are real haikus!! What haikus were meant to be! Nice job, Suzanne! :) gw

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/21/2023 10:58:00 AM

Thanks for you encouraging words Gershon…… My Muse takes all the credit LOL

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/19/2023 8:08:00 PM

Haiku's either work, or thy fall flat. Yours just sailed overhead on it's way to Mars. Wonderfully written. A fave

Bill Baker

Date: 8/19/2023 8:52:00 AM

The photo of the painting, was breathtaking. The intro info, intriguing. The poetry, a perfect match for the two thoughts above. A FAV for me, SuZ. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/19/2023 10:28:00 AM

I’m so happy you enjoyed, Bill……and a FAV from you is greatly appreciated. SuZ

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/19/2023 7:04:00 AM

Your creation of a remarkable poem possesses the ability to deeply resonate with individuals on an emotional level. The fusion of elegance and conciseness within your work is truly awe-inspiring. I must express that this haiku ranks among the finest I have ever encountered. Furthermore, I extend my gratitude for providing the elucidating definitions accompanying your poetic piece.

Tom Woody
Date: 8/19/2023 9:41:00 AM

Agreed

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/19/2023 7:44:00 AM

What a wonderful comment and feedback you have left for me, Sotto……..I love to find words that work like these because many do not act as expansively in the soul and brain to unite a meaning so concisely. Have a wonderful day. SuZ

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2023 6:46:00 AM

such beauty in so few words Suz:-) thanks for all your support on my poetry:-) hugs jan xx

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/19/2023 7:40:00 AM

So nice to see you, Jan: Thanks for your lovely comment, SuZ

Tom Woody

Date: 8/19/2023 6:29:00 AM

Good night Gracie! This is some of the best haiku I've read. And thank you for the definitions. Nice to see you're still around Suzanne. There's a fresh buzz on PS of late

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/19/2023 7:39:00 AM

Hello Tom: Nice to see you and Thank you for your kind words, A real tonic, Will stop by for a visit soon. SuZ