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A Haiku Moment

No breeze tonight
Trees pose statuesque
Flowers icily still
Time slows to a stop
Grasses stand to attention's call
Thought holds on pause
Air has that feel of fall

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Carrie Richards

November 7, 2008 at 9:58 AM

A well deserved poem to be featured. The soft feel of fall displayed in your words. Congratulations, Brian! ~ Carrie

Chitra Lakhera

November 4, 2008 at 6:51 AM

I can very well imagine this. Great overview of selective things. Congratulations on being featured! Love, Chitra

Daver Austin

November 4, 2008 at 4:14 AM

Congrats on this choice, a fine painting in few words. Love, daver

Nigel Fawcett

November 3, 2008 at 1:20 PM

Brian, well deserved congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Nigel

Carrie Richards

November 3, 2008 at 8:49 AM

A lovely, calming poem to be featured this week! Congratulations, Brian.....Blessings, Carrie

Sharon Winter

November 3, 2008 at 8:16 AM

Warmest congrats Brian on your amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 3, 2008 at 5:05 AM

Sensational. I love this Brian. Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol

Elaine George

November 2, 2008 at 4:55 PM

What a wonderful picture you paint with these words, Brian. I love your personification 'Heirloom', as you know. Good luck in the finals. Lainie

Vince Suzadail Jr.

November 2, 2008 at 4:43 PM

Congratulations Brian, On "A Haiku Moment" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

Sharon Winter

August 11, 2008 at 7:07 AM

And oh how I love this time of year. You have personified nature here with its knowing of the coming change of season. Brilliant in imagery and all else. I agree with Heidie as I clearly see a painting here. Love, Shar

Laura Mckenzie

August 10, 2008 at 6:44 PM

Brian great imagery and feel to this wonderful write! Laura :)

Heidie Buys

August 9, 2008 at 3:41 PM

You really should be a painter, you use your images like an artist. This is so beautiful Brian, very well done. Regards Heidie

James Foulk

August 9, 2008 at 10:17 AM

a very peaceful, warm, refreshing piece of poetry. thank you for reading Two forks in the road, and for your comment.

Michael Jordan

August 9, 2008 at 7:53 AM

A very relaxing and well written piece Brian - Fall is truly a beautiful season - I appreciate your support and comments on my poetry - Coming from you it really means a lot for your so knowledgeable when it comes to poetry - hope that came out right - God bless Brian

Kristin Reynolds

August 9, 2008 at 4:21 AM

Oh, Brian, this is awesome - one of your best. Fall is my favorite time of year, and here, right now it is cold - only about 10 C - and I can feel fall in the air, too! This is one for my favorites, so beautifully written, I know this scene well. Love Kristin

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