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A Haiku Moment

No breeze tonight Trees pose statuesque Flowers icily still Time slows to a stop Grasses stand to attention's call Thought holds on pause Air has that feel of fall

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Carrie Richards

Date: 11/7/2008 9:58:00 AM

A well deserved poem to be featured. The soft feel of fall displayed in your words. Congratulations, Brian! ~ Carrie

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 11/4/2008 6:51:00 AM

I can very well imagine this. Great overview of selective things. Congratulations on being featured! Love, Chitra

Daver Austin

Date: 11/4/2008 4:14:00 AM

Congrats on this choice, a fine painting in few words. Love, daver

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/3/2008 1:20:00 PM

Brian, well deserved congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Nigel

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/3/2008 8:49:00 AM

A lovely, calming poem to be featured this week! Congratulations, Brian.....Blessings, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/3/2008 8:16:00 AM

Warmest congrats Brian on your amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/3/2008 5:05:00 AM

Sensational. I love this Brian. Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 11/2/2008 4:55:00 PM

What a wonderful picture you paint with these words, Brian. I love your personification 'Heirloom', as you know. Good luck in the finals. Lainie

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/2/2008 4:43:00 PM

Congratulations Brian, On "A Haiku Moment" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/11/2008 7:07:00 AM

And oh how I love this time of year. You have personified nature here with its knowing of the coming change of season. Brilliant in imagery and all else. I agree with Heidie as I clearly see a painting here. Love, Shar

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/10/2008 6:44:00 PM

Brian great imagery and feel to this wonderful write! Laura :)

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/9/2008 3:41:00 PM

You really should be a painter, you use your images like an artist. This is so beautiful Brian, very well done. Regards Heidie

James Foulk

Date: 8/9/2008 10:17:00 AM

a very peaceful, warm, refreshing piece of poetry. thank you for reading Two forks in the road, and for your comment.

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/9/2008 7:53:00 AM

A very relaxing and well written piece Brian - Fall is truly a beautiful season - I appreciate your support and comments on my poetry - Coming from you it really means a lot for your so knowledgeable when it comes to poetry - hope that came out right - God bless Brian

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/9/2008 4:21:00 AM

Oh, Brian, this is awesome - one of your best. Fall is my favorite time of year, and here, right now it is cold - only about 10 C - and I can feel fall in the air, too! This is one for my favorites, so beautifully written, I know this scene well. Love Kristin