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A Haiku #2

an autumn preview-
snowberries sunbathing in
a Summer peepshow

seasonsautumnhaiku

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Wilma Neels

September 10, 2010 at 4:18 AM

Brian, I love the idea of a summer peepshow, made me ;) congratulations on your win, rgds Wilma

James Fraser

September 2, 2010 at 12:39 PM

Wonderful Haiku Brian, most desereved of it's win in the contest >> James

Francine Roberts

September 2, 2010 at 8:32 AM

nice one , congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 2, 2010 at 4:19 AM

Congratulations on your win Brian in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

September 1, 2010 at 9:46 PM

REally nice, Brian. Long time no see. Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 1, 2010 at 6:53 PM

Congratulations on the win in summer contest, Brian. You are not seen much on PS, Brian.

Skat A

September 1, 2010 at 6:01 PM

Brian, Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 1, 2010 at 5:15 PM

Congrats Brian on your win in the Summer Haiku contest... awesome words my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory..luv..

Karla Null

August 30, 2009 at 10:22 PM

So little says so much, good one Brian...Karla

John Loving Iii

August 30, 2009 at 5:34 PM

another gift from God along with the flowers that waited so long to bloom. i'm at the age where i'm finally noticing. john

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 30, 2009 at 2:11 PM

Here it is Sunday and the begining of a new week is upon us. And August is leaving us way to soon. I am enjoying reading such excellent poems today and am happy to see your poetry among them Brian. May your pen forever flow. Love, Carol

John Freeman

August 30, 2009 at 12:36 PM

You're right, of course, summer's signals, many would say fall's signals, but that would be wrong, it's summer's signals of fall approaching. Brilliant Brian!

Deirdre Omaidin

August 30, 2009 at 9:54 AM

This is a wonderful line, most original, just a charming picture. Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín

James Peranteau

August 30, 2009 at 8:54 AM

Yes Yes Yes !!! How I long for your poetic thoughts to rush to me,...the cold days are just fantastic to me,....aside from the beautiful spring !!!!! Great poem Brian !!! james