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A HAIKU

this summer morning- azalea perfume hints and yellows the lawn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/22/2010 6:43:00 AM
Great Haiku!!! thank you for going bac and reading my first ever poem...Michael
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Date: 8/12/2010 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Flowers,Trees & Shrubs I Luv Haiku". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations Brian on your success in Linda's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/8/2010 11:05:00 AM
lovely, congrats on your win
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:07:00 PM
Wonderful imagery. Love that last line. Andrea
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:59:00 PM
Congrats on the win with this perfect haiku, Brian
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Date: 8/7/2010 7:47:00 PM
do you have yellow azealas? I don't think I have ever seen those...
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Date: 8/7/2010 8:22:00 AM
Loved the images Brian, congratulations on your win as well.. Wilma
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Date: 8/7/2010 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Brian. Here the azaleas are among the first to bloom in early spring, but as you travel further north, their blooming season does approach summer. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 8/7/2010 6:46:00 AM
Congrats Brian on your success in my Haiku contest with this rare beauty.. appreciate your constant support in my endeavors.. and for all your assistance to get me started in sponsoring contests on Soup.. thankxxx for being the Master Teacher here.. with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 5:46:00 AM
Thankxxx for supporting my contest Brian.. happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 2:48:00 AM
A sure sign of Autumn's arrival , Brian , well captured in perfect Haiku .....
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