A Haiku

The moonlight dancing
A reflecting pool of dreams
Singing in my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loveless Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 10:36 AM
this is really beautiful <3 i love it
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 11:38 AM
wow briit this is a great haiku so very descriptive and thought provokeing in a way that it is stimulating to the visual senses! it is very beautiful which to me makes a good haiku a great haiku! =)Jo
Hallett Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 11:05 AM
I like it. very nice. Keep writing -Courtney-
Devonshire Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:01 AM
Delightful image of the moonbeams reflecting, Brittany, and it's so good to see you posting again. Love, Carolyn
Hill Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 9:48 AM
lovely, lovely, lovely...TAH
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