A Gypsy For Aries

***( Inspired from a story I heard of a bitter Greek military officer torn between

        love and duty; he would not run away with her, 

        so she ran away from him....)




The last dance tonite....

   waltzing with me,

   this gypsy woman with wild eyes

   and a devilish smile;

She would not let me go....

   nor the kiss of her wines,

   her touch teased....

   and lingered,

Yet she danced and tore away,

   where the moon had spun her allure,

   and candles were blazing

   wild with sweet-west winds,

On a night-boat then we sat,

   and floated to some bright shore;

   her eyes many moons of love,

   her hair flowed with a velvet mood....

But a heart wan with thorn and accusation,

   and dance no more she would,

   though with bedroom gaze 

   she touched as Venus;

   a silk gown to beckon ----

   on stardust we could climb

   some celestial stairway,

   make love for the ages....

   forsake the sword in its bloodied sheath,

Though the gods would grumble ----

   the universe would wed us long before war,

   'ere Venus could whisper its name.....

Yet it is but a dream;

    for men must make heroes of devils,

    and kings must rule, and accuse

   (and gypsies must trick old fools....)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lariviere Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 3:42 PM
This poem dances on the page!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Many thanks Etienne, I hope you could hear the music too!
A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 8:20 PM
Thank you so much for the reply.... Love LINDA
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:42 AM
My pleasure wonderful;-) Love Keith
Lindley Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 10:12 AM
Another great poem my friend. Love the last line! A super 7 and rates even higher in truth..
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:45 AM
You made my day Robert, truth is the essence of good art!
A   Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 10:04 PM
the way you wrote about her made me get into a daze, loved your imagery. Love can drive us to do many things and some women know how to use it to drive people crazy lol, enjoyed your write -p.d.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 3:23 PM
Glad you enjoyed Linda, the 'daze' is proof... Woman can be intoxicating, yes... (!) Keith:-)
Vaso Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Keith you are a master of story telling, with such elegant prose, amazing yet again!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 3:21 PM
Thanks my friend! You are an eternal inspiration... Always, Keith:-)
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 3:16 AM
- A really good story - The gypsy's maybe trick old fools .... but, when the brain cells works no one could be fooled - There is "an ocean" of exciting stories in the Greek mythology - I enjoy reading this, Keith - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Thanks Anne for your visit --- yes I do enjoy writing from Greek mythology, and there is a lot of good ideas to work with --- ideas that apply to real life; and the theme in this poem is quite common today --- a rift between love and duty, which if 'the brain cells work' things can be rationally worked out! Always, Keith:-)
Chircop Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 5:11 PM
Her eyes many moons of love,Her hair flowed with a velvet mood-Amazing description and outstanding tale Keith,Really enjoyed.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Always love your visits Charma, you always find a way to inspire... Glad you enjoyed! Always, Keith:-)
Smith Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 4:56 PM
Keith an epic tale you weaved here...love the last line...gypsies must trick old fools
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:35 PM
....ahhh, good you liked the last line --- it sums everything up! Thanks for your visit Tim! Keith:-)
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