A Gutter

in a dirty clutter day-old larvae wriggle some in stark stench flutter kerosene poured on them sealing siphons of breath lamp oil shuts their shutter
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Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 12:14 PM
Interesting. Congrats!
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 12:15 PM
Thanks Kim.
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 10:40 AM
Congrats. I am glad she gave freedom with the title.
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 12:14 PM
I changed the title back after the contest has been judged because I feel just "gutter" may not be an appropriate title for the poem. Thanks for your congratulatory message.
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 2:07 PM
This is very well crafted. Not positive but I think your title needs to be just one word
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 12:21 AM
Thanks for pointing it out. I initially thought freedom was allowed in choosing the title so far "gutter" etc was included in the title. However, your pointing it out cleared my doubt about it, thanks.
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