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Written, March 28, 2024

Poetry/Free Verse/a gust of birds
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1632-607-28
All Rights Reserved, 2024,  Constance La France

Sparrow flying and glowing, in watercolor painting a...

a gust of birds



birds are hidden & tweeting in bushes
     until a wind creates a gust of birds
& a gang of sparrows fly across a field
       leaving the safety of undergrowth
                            with wings beating
 instinct made them flee the uncertain
         & from distant trees they watch 
           then, the gang returns as one
                       in a flash of wings
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March 29, 2024 at 12:43 PM
Beautiful and so well written, i love the way youv painted imagery in a very seamless manner. I can see through your words, gang of sparrows, distant trees and so much more, so artistic, fitting picture too for the poem. Pleasure always reading your work dear constance. Sending you light always
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March 29, 2024 at 3:31 PM
Ink, thank you for the compliment, and the wonderful compliment, hugs, Constance
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