Tricia Campese Poet Free verse

A Gun

They say kill the bad thoughts and feelings, but they're all concealed in your head? So,do you blow your brains out and hope that your scattered insides contain the impure thoughts?...purge yourself with a gun?...

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Darren White February 18, 2017 at 12:45 PM yep, been there done that.... isn't it horrible? write it down, that's what I do, and so do you apparently. It's good, so raw and rough, so very good.

Mike Hauser January 20, 2017 at 8:37 AM Powerful piece! Tricia Campese January 20, 2017 at 10:10 AM Thank you!!

John Fleming January 12, 2017 at 11:22 AM Wow...Powerful write, Tricia - This is really gritty stuff! All my best...And may your New Year be a fulfilling and contented one! :) john P.s Reminds me of Sylvia Plath. Tricia Campese January 12, 2017 at 12:13 PM Thank you so much! :)