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a grey heron

a grey heron awaits his meal frozen in time submitted on July 24, for contest BIRD THEMED HAIKU sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN posted on July 22, 2018

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Date: 7/22/2018 9:04:00 PM
Such a great haiku, Line. Amazing imagery. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/22/2018 9:18:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Susan.
Date: 7/22/2018 8:39:00 PM
I like this one even better in gray!!
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Date: 7/22/2018 9:18:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/22/2018 11:20:00 AM
Wonderful ku :) never seen a grey one, xomo
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Date: 7/22/2018 11:40:00 AM
Not sure if the size differs - but yes, both exist. Herons are so elegant. Line xx
Date: 7/22/2018 10:35:00 AM
And they look like prehistoric birds too, because I used to have a regular visitor of one. This poem is reminding me of him.
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Date: 7/22/2018 11:41:00 AM
So true. Thanks for your visit, Caren, and your paleo-zoological comment. Love it.