Larry Bradfield Poet Limerick

A Great Lover

My kisses once gave her the shivers
I hugged her and she took the quivers
I smiled as a great lover
'Til she turned back the cover
A snake had crawled up from the rivers

8-30-18
Charles Messina's contest Any Animal or Creature Lmerick

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Sara Kendrick September 18, 2018 at 10:15 AM I have read your humorous short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2018 at 3:53 PM haha, I am reading a meaning into this one which I hope you meant to imply. Congrats. Very clever. Larry Bradfield September 14, 2018 at 10:07 PM Thanks, Andrea. Guilty as suspected!

Line Gauthier September 13, 2018 at 12:19 AM Congrats on your win, Larry. Larry Bradfield September 14, 2018 at 10:07 PM Thank you!!

Charles Messina September 12, 2018 at 11:26 AM Yes, snakes do like covers. I once found one in my sleeping bag while camping in the Catskill mountains. Love this, congratulations on your win Larry, and thanks for entering my contest...Charlie

Darlene De Beaulieu September 1, 2018 at 7:05 PM Hello Larry, nice poem untili read the last line.Yuck! Have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu September 2, 2018 at 1:22 PM Yes they do. Larry Bradfield September 1, 2018 at 8:40 PM Thanks, Darlene! Snakes do have that effect

Virginia Waters August 31, 2018 at 12:58 AM haha - good one! Larry Bradfield August 31, 2018 at 5:17 PM Thanks, Virginia!