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A Great Lover

My kisses once gave her the shivers I hugged her and she took the quivers I smiled as a great lover 'Til she turned back the cover A snake had crawled up from the rivers 8-30-18 Charles Messina's contest Any Animal or Creature Lmerick

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2018 10:15:00 AM

I have read your humorous short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2018 3:53:00 PM

haha, I am reading a meaning into this one which I hope you meant to imply. Congrats. Very clever.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/14/2018 10:07:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Guilty as suspected!

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/13/2018 12:19:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Larry.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/14/2018 10:07:00 PM

Thank you!!

Charles Messina

Date: 9/12/2018 11:26:00 AM

Yes, snakes do like covers. I once found one in my sleeping bag while camping in the Catskill mountains. Love this, congratulations on your win Larry, and thanks for entering my contest...Charlie

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/1/2018 7:05:00 PM

Hello Larry, nice poem untili read the last line.Yuck! Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/2/2018 1:22:00 PM

Yes they do.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/1/2018 8:40:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene! Snakes do have that effect

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/31/2018 12:58:00 AM

haha - good one!

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/31/2018 5:17:00 PM

Thanks, Virginia!