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a great fall day
totally calm, feeling fine...
bubble wrapped package

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/25/2016 7:01:00 AM

Clever verse! I like it XD Rated this one a 7

Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2016 4:09:00 PM

What fun bubble popping! I hope you won't mind me joining you, Sara:) I don't know how women can walk on stilettos! But thinking about it, in the 70s I remember men wearing high-heeled shoes (10cms+)!! // paul

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/10/2016 1:39:00 AM

Very cute Sara...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2016 8:14:00 AM

Thanks for the visit to my page..I hope that you got a chuckle..Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/8/2016 9:34:00 AM

Hi Sara, I enjoyed the dance. Nice Haiku:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2016 8:13:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by..Glad that you enjoyed the dance..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/6/2016 12:47:00 PM

- What fun bubble dancing, Sara :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2016 8:13:00 AM

Yes, I had fun popping those bubbles but not with stilettoes ..LOL..With comfy houseshoes..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/1/2016 5:55:00 PM

Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed the read. Excellent piece.............A.M.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2016 3:49:00 PM

Cute one, Sara. I love stepping on that stuff.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/1/2016 4:50:00 PM

It is fun doing the bubble wrap hop..LOL..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/1/2016 2:02:00 PM

Ah, what simple things make children (and pets) happy. Even as an adult, I sometimes enjoy popping the bubble wrap. My cats used to enjoy the paper gifts came in more than the gifts themselves. This haiku is a delight, Sara! (My Soup Mail is not working. I notified admin.)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/1/2016 4:45:00 PM

Ahhh!!! It was me who put the bubble wrap on the floor and started walking on it..LOL..I expect the pets tried to find a place that was safe away from the gun going off....Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paloma P

Date: 11/1/2016 12:06:00 PM

Feel good poem, made me smile!

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/31/2016 4:39:00 PM

Bubble wrap is fun any day! My dog goes crazy when he gets around it. Funniest thing I've ever watched. Love this poem, Mrs Sara.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2016 11:45:00 AM

I received a package this morning/ a used food processor to replace a part on mine that had broken..It came fully encased in bubble wrap..My first thought was just get the bubble wrap off and go sit down and pop some bubbles..LOL>>>>Sara

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