A Great Fall

Johnny was balancing on a high wall
He tripped pretending an entreating fall
with a big bump on his head
wife shook a finger and said
don't know whether you're brilliant or screwball


10/19/2017
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Michaels Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 1:26 PM
Nicely done, Eve!! All the best, John.
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 10:48 AM
Ha Ha he must be a screwball. Great one. Love and regards.
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:39 PM
GREAT last line, as limericks MUST have them to be worth their salt!!
Vaso Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 2:32 PM
LOL so funny Eve Hugs!
One Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 9:20 AM
sounds like a screwball to me.. nice limerick Eve..
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