A Gray Horizon

Seaweed strands woven prettily, unwind
spread tendrils of green sublime
the grace of a fluid dancer dressed up
to perform while the seagull cries
the afternoon curtain call

Incoming or out going, the waves turn
against the tide to ride for free
Recurring rhythms pulse, comfortably
Recline upon their earthly saline chariot
Lost horizon forgives the grey mist

Shrouds worn abandoned over treetops
melts the lines and blurs reality
inside lives the heartbeat, found again
while Autumn begins it's dance
awakens the maiden of trees reflection

Shimmer across time's unseen dimension
carry the colors of a new born moment
disappear into the unknown
the secrets kept are safe in her bosom
of ample forgiveness found in a new season

Dark clouds rise to curl around the sun's tongue
turn to candy colored rocks, strewn about
slippery against the souls of forgotten men
yet found in their beauty of differences
you take one home to light the way

The path becomes one of many parts
written by footprints along the shoreline
inland worries escape to the sea
roll with fate or steady the oars over swells
elements of whispered prayers

Floating languid white bubbles 
waiting for the mermaids kiss of fairytales
buried beneath layers of childhood
beliefs that crystallized in glided goblets
then touched gingerly for substance

Carry me to the top of the gray horizon
to sail as I will with confidence
a funeral flower will float for the heavens
and give itself in your honor
the sea asked for nothing in return

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/3/2021 10:32:00 AM
The artist in you shines through here Jeanne. A melancholy but beautiful write. Cheers - Gary
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/4/2021 11:56:00 AM
What a lovely comment. Thank you Gary. I can still feel the moment of that day when I read my poem.
Date: 9/20/2021 7:54:00 PM
Wow! Fabulous imagery. Magic use of language, so many phrases are lingering, replaying their lovely music in my mind. Will come back to this one. Excellent poetry! A favorite.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/21/2021 7:54:00 AM
Yes. And the obvious sadness also. Life is sometimes, along with the joy, so crushingly bitter. Blessings my friend.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/21/2021 7:28:00 AM
Hi Joe, Thank you so much for your comments. It was a very foggy day on the bay and I had just lost a dear friend to Covid. There was beauty and magic despite my sadness. I'm glad it found a spot in your heart too. jeanne
Date: 9/13/2021 11:13:00 AM
A beautiful verse with great imagery Jeanne.. "fluid dancer dressed up to perform.. "... loved this line.. so well crafted... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/21/2021 7:26:00 AM
Good Morning Ani, thanks for stopping and for letting me know of your favorite line. This was in honor of a dear friend who had just passed the day before.
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