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A Grand Experiment

To a world of darkness, of brawling, of territorial fights came a moment of clarity, dawned a new light A grand experiment, daring beyond all comprehension which could have exacerbated underlying tensions But it found firm footing, and despite imperfections there arose a new nation after seven years of insurrection A place where a man could upgrade his station in life and a revolution's pen was as sharp as a hunter's knife A land to roam, to explore, to cultivate A land of mountains, forests, and plains so great With a wilderness untamed, and where rivers breathed free Where you could assert you, and I could become me Yet alack and alas, the land's bright promise has faded midst darkness and brawling and descendants become jaded And now America's a nation, very much like the others where no man is your brother and sons turn on their mothers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/4/2021 6:57:00 AM
This is beautiful. It is so sad to see what is happening to our country.
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Date: 3/3/2021 5:08:00 PM
WoW you tell it like it is my brother. America has such a grand and impressive history and our forefathers would literally turn over in their graves to see what we have turned it into. They gave up so much to create something wonderful. A nation under God with liberty and justice for all. Now look at the mess we have made of it. Good stuff Gershon. Write on. God Bless, JB
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2021 5:17:00 PM
Judy, your generous evaluation of this write simply makes my evening! Thank you so, so much. Faith and Strength, Gershon
Date: 3/3/2021 12:25:00 PM
This is one of your best, Gershon! Aloha! Rico
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2021 5:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for the encouraging words, Rico! ... Now as for 'all the rest' -- lol. Appreciated. Take good care, Gershon
Date: 3/2/2021 6:41:00 PM
O my, Gershon, I'd hope we have not sunk that far, but I'm holding my breath. Thanks for these couplets. They are important and the message is sorely needed. Thank you.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2021 5:15:00 PM
I believe we have sunk to the level of snitching and even spying on each other, as I have seen it time and again over the past ten years, not just during the pandemic. Think back yourself, to the stories of the kids who turned in their parents and vice versa. Unthinkable until recently. And very similar to the former Soviet Union, as my wife (from Ukraine) and friends all tell me. At any rate, thanks for the nice comment and hang in there! :) gw

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