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A Good Night's Sleep



 I gather my dreams
Place them under my pillow
Drift out of this world
Sleep softens the rough edges
Awake with new day's promise 



For Brian's contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 29, 2011 at 5:27 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in the contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2011 at 8:41 PM

I just LOVE this. So original, Barbara.congrats on your win.

Carolyn Devonshire

June 5, 2011 at 11:59 AM

PS - My entire "table of four" did well in this contest! We golden gals rock together.

Carolyn Devonshire

June 5, 2011 at 11:58 AM

Not surprised to see you ranking high with this beauty, dear LNC. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

Emma Mantle

June 5, 2011 at 10:40 AM

Congrats on your win Barbara. Best wishes to you Em :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 5, 2011 at 8:12 AM

Congrats BG on your third place win in Brian's contest with this rare beauty ..enjoy..with luv..

Nette Onclaud

June 5, 2011 at 7:44 AM

enjoyed this with gusto, barbara.. congrats big time.:) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 4, 2011 at 4:57 PM

Wonderful entry with tanka, Barabara. I enjoyed the images in the write,

Carolyn Devonshire

June 4, 2011 at 12:32 PM

Dear LNC, Brian is going to love this one as much as I do. Especially like the way sleep "softens the rough edges." It really does have a way of restoring our spirits. An exquisite entry for the contest. Wishing you success! Glad you enjoyed the Golden Girls. Our secret is out. Now everyone will know we're LNCs. Love, Carolyn