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A Good, Good Father

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Silent, like the moments Just after snow Sighs through the still, dark night Reflecting moon and stars Hurrying to touch the ground Smiling, like the break of day When sunshine breathes A kiss against the naked face Whispering gentle wishes Through the light that strokes Tender, like a prayer Kindly, like the psalms Embracing the heart, the soul With a intimacy, a vibrant Hue of grace and music Promising to baptize hopes In laughter, lingering Joy that is so beautiful It inspires the spirit to dance Warmly, like the color of fire Flames risking their blaze On the wonder of singing praise To the Creator, the maker Of everything there is – each tree Each dream – each in between Breathlessly, like the rain Falling softly on the flowers Stirring them to life Preparing buds to bloom, alive As a vibrant hue of grace Beckoning from its place Olive stems portraying faith Love, like the One who brings life To every soul, each hope, Even the dreams listen in peace To the One who makes us each one Aware of His wonder, His compassion The way He gives without expectation The way He lives in the spirit, accepting Everyone who comes to Him, humbly Willing to repent and give to Him A spirit of contrition – finding satisfaction In the glory of His gift, His grace The salvation that is His gift Praising Him… I will never forget where I’ve been Or how HE brought me out of the darkness Into the light of a new day, a new way His love is like the love of a Father Even more – He is the best Father of all 5/13/22

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Date: 6/8/2022 3:16:00 PM
nothing better than a close relation with God, and you have done an excellent job, line by line, celebrating that relationship
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Date: 5/19/2022 8:56:00 AM
"He is the best Father of all" - No Doubt! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/17/2022 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Beautifully written to the Father we all share, the Father who loves us unconditionally. :)Paulette
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Date: 5/17/2022 6:24:00 AM
Wow, Gina! Your words are beautiful from start to finish and express our Father's love so well. A fave for me. Big congrats...Rhonda xx
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Date: 5/17/2022 2:07:00 AM
Gina you have nailed it on a father's love....Great poem indeed...Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/16/2022 2:55:00 PM
Gina, you have given us a full picture of an earthly father in the image of our Heavenly father. Seems to me there was a song like this this on Christian radio about two years ago. Congratulations on your win! Hugs and blessings!
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 5/16/2022 10:14:00 PM
There is a song with that title but it is totally different ... the words are. I love it though :) Thanks.
Date: 5/16/2022 7:41:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, so faith-edifying. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
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