A Good French Poem

A Good French Poem



I’m tall, lovely, Black and Brunette.
I’m good not petite.
Happy and healthy.
Strong person.
Whole person.
Like a whole apple, I can eat…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bocsa Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Life and love like an apple...Wonderful imagery.Congrat
Karim Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Thank you.
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 5:05 PM
This is good fresh and compact. I'm going to read more of your material s o you can stop by and read some more of mine. LIVE A LUCKY LAVANDER LIFE. VB Rogers
Karim Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 5:08 PM
What do you mean? I don't have a lucky life. What is a lucky life to you?
Shiells Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 12:19 PM
Hi Ayesha, Loved this write! Powerful and true. Thanks so much for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah
Karim Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 9:11 PM
I'm beaming that you loved my poem! I'm so happy to be a Souper. I really am. It's amazing how many great comments I get from strangers who like my work.
Rogers Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 11:36 AM
Un bon poème français Je suis grande, belle, noire et brune. Je suis bon pas petite. Heureux et en santé. Personne forte. Personne à part entière. Comme une pomme entière, je peux manger ... Nice whimsy...smile//Sinclair
Karim Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Merci.
Marszalowicz Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 6:01 PM
I like the fiber of this poem I feel it should have been longer I doubt you expressed your entire beautiful character in these words.
Karim Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 7:17 PM
This is a short poem. I've written many longer poems and I want to write a prose poem that's several pages but short poems can be good and still be short. Thank you about what you said about my character. Thank you so much.
Tomar Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 12:00 PM
The last line is like a cherry on the cake. Like a whole apple I can eat...WOW!! Enjoyed it!
Karim Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 7:14 AM
I'm so glad you liked my poems.
Thomas Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:50 AM
I hear you ayesha!!! Now thats a good french poem lol the best way to be is who we are!!! Love it. Thanks4sharing......Cheriex
Karim Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 3:13 PM
I'm glad you liked my poem. Thanks for commenting!
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