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A Good Cry

i wait at the river for the cry of the loon
                                                                      
from below 
in the muck 
reeds 
grow tall 
there are no lips that will draw music 
from these clarinet dwellers

i stand under the brightly lit dusk
nearly motionless

the moon above is glued in place nailed in to its spot
holding on to a piece of the bedtime sky 

the little dipper reminds me of a rocking chair
my favourite star shines just a little dimmer 

time passes 
does so 
uninvited 

its metronome beat replaces the soundscape 
of an otherwise musically crowded air 

a hand descends from above
cuts the trapped moon down to a sliver
leaving the twilight mostly blind

i'm getting old
still even my worn out senses 
are aware 
of the days
aware
of that single golden eye
of its rise
its set 
its endless loop

quiet is my flow of sand

stressed beyond reason
my lungs want to burst
my brain explode
my emotions are stretched passed their limit

my chest fills
my chest empties

the choice was 
has always been mine
i have not lived the life i was gifted

i'm frozen
i'm hot
like a statue baking in the unforgiving rays of Sol

wide awake in the after dark
with all the usual players

the wolf with his cool stance 
dressed in a zoot suit 
snapping his beatnik fingers
wooing the maiden night

the lynx with a fluid stride plays 
the ground like bongo drums 
negotiates the air like brushes on snares

a choir of flyers lend their songs

there is a chasm of nurtured colours 
engulfing me in its rich deep tones

having stood here longer then i know
i inhale my time in tiny puffs 

i am void of the sanity i once possessed
i happily dismissed that blurry concept a long time ago
it is you know an overrated attribute 

time moves with a second hand like a plane propeller 
i live every moment as fully as my strength allows

all the living at the river and its surrounding land
add their breath to the natural air of the eventide 

i breathe in the chill of the nightfall air 
and i 

i wait at the river for the cry of the loon


September 28 2015
armand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 7:57 AM
your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7.
A   Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 3:54 AM
WOW, Today, I name you the best POET of Poetry Soup, with no doubt. I read the first line, not only was it a moving piece. I fell in love with your tender voice during your opening and closing line. This is perfect, you are perfect my friend. Nature plays a very awesome part in your poem. Thank you for sharing the depth of you. SMILE, WITH ME. I hope we both return and become active again. Sending hugs and TAGGING this poem. TAG, TAG, this is going on my favorite list. YOUR BIGGEST FAN ~~ LINDA
Sietesantos Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 1:27 PM
Maurice, you just continue to amaze me with the wondrous pieces that emanate from your golden pen! This piece, with its artful imagery and flow, explodes into splashes of color on to a mind-blowing painting! This is how I would like to write when I grow up :-)! Congratulations and a 7 on being selected as POTD! Pandita
May Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 4:17 PM
An excellent write ...I like how you ended as you began...as another set of observations loom...best wishes
Austin Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 12:07 PM
The loon a clarinet dweller - my son would like that line, his being a professional clarinetist. This is Maurice at his dramatic, descriptive best. You capture a certain passion in your work. "The lynx with his fluid strides...negotiates the air like brushes on snares." Wonderful! Love, daver
Koven Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 11:19 AM
Armand, all I can say is wow! Allan
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 7:48 PM
Armand, I saw this one a few days ago. I love it. Did you post another new one? I can't see one. I can't recall if I faved this one, but I am going to try to fave it now. It is really a stunning poem. Says so much about YOU.
Callus Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 4:15 PM
POTD....and deservedly so Armand!! Congratulations for a a beautiful and touching offering, tucked in between the repeated opening and closing lines. The phrase "have not lived the life I was gifted" is still playing in my mind! ~ So pleased to have you posting again. All the best, my friend. // paul
Carmack Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Impressive Armand. "quiet is my flow of sand" but loud is our regret. This is a powerful poem. Congrats on POTD.
Haight Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 11:00 AM
Amazing poem, Armand. Huge congrats on it being selected Poem of the Day. Sandra
Bateman Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 5:34 PM
Hello Armand, Congratulation on POTD!! This one's a "think-piece" for sure. it's very impressive write indeed. And Belated Birthday Wishes!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Inman Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 10:35 AM
You impress me Maurice. What a wonderful write.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 9:55 AM
You are amazing Armand, congrats on POTD!
Lawless Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 8:12 PM
Masterfully done Armand. The bookends of the ever eerie cry of the loon encase this in wonder. Good to see you dropping in on us again. You are missed.
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 6:38 PM
your poem is on best new poems list now, Armand. Maybe top 100 ever. Just thought I would drop by and tell you that. Miss you. Please come back!!
Meade Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations!
Manassian Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 10:12 AM
Beautiful imagery, many dear. Nice to see you post again. Loved the ending. Thanks for visiting me...congrats on POTD. hugs
Y. Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 8:49 AM
Armand, Happy Belated Birthday! I hope you had a wonderful day. This is such a well written beautiful poem. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
Gupta Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 4:54 AM
My chest rose in a heave as I was coming across the line “quiet is my flow of sand”. Somewhere some shade weaving pleasant blades of grass.
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 4:16 AM
- Congrats on your p.o.t.d. Armand - A wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 2:53 AM
wonderful read.. Belated birthday wishes :)) May God bless you with all wonders,love, peace and happiness in life..:)) Congrats on being the POTD. a ~7~ and to my favs :))
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 1:19 AM
Congrats on POEM OF THE DAY Armand - you are always in my thoughts:-) love and hugs as ever :-) Jan xx7
Vaso Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 9:38 PM
First let me wish you a very Happy Birthday, even if belated! I know its also special turning 29! LOL I haven't seen you around as much, so also great too see you back here!!!!! Almost no need to say, but the poem is beautiful.
Meade Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 6:29 PM
Dear friend, hear the cry of the loon, let its call reverberate throughout your soul like a cleansing rain to wash away the heartaches and bring forth a new day! Your raw energy flow through each word you crafted.
Smith Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Im am so sorry for your heartache and loss my friend. It is great to see you here and you know you can always lean on us. A fabulous introspection my friend.
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