A Gold's Reverie

Scent of men and sweat pervade this little space
away from vast expanse of exercise machines at this gym.
Here they strain beneath laden bars
or lift and lower black and silver weights held in their hands.

A delicious black-haired male with slim yet sturdy legs 
exposes muscles which tense as he steadily pumps iron.
Beautiful and intense dark orbs  peer into the mirror
at the biceps of his own taut and tawny arms.

Now he lies upon his back and hoists a bar.
The sound of his laborious exhalations permeates the room.
He doesn’t notice the pair of paler eyes on him
(I also watch the mirror. . . but more discreetly).
My softer respirations match his rhythm.
Then. . . with his final reps come virile groans.
Inside my head. . . I moan and I see myself
above his rippled abdomen and heaving chest,
pressed against his sweet, dark perspiring skin.

The fragrance of my lingering Taboo
mingles with his musk.
I see him glance my way, and I avert my eyes.
If he takes to older women as well as to the younger girls
and if he fancies ones like me - robust and voluptuous -
not just the females delicate and slender as reeds ,
perhaps he is breathing in the essence that is me,
and for that one moment in time. . . I’m the fantasy.


For Cyndi MACMILLAN'S "MY SPICE BOX: SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY.Poetry Contest"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/7/2013 6:24:00 AM
Well!! What else can I say? Nicely written, though. *-) Red
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Date: 3/8/2013 1:45:00 PM
Wow hot hot hot this male fantasy in the gym. I want one of those too. lol love phyl
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Date: 3/2/2013 5:16:00 AM
So glad to read this once again and saw it on the winners list my dear friend, Andrea! A great write indeed and hmmmnnn.. I just read that it's a kind of true story ;) Congrats again and Cheers my dearest friend! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/2/2013 12:57:00 AM
Visiting again to congratulate on the win with this sweet whim at the gym, Andrea, Do you still visit the gym?:) Jag
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Date: 3/1/2013 8:32:00 PM
Can I have the address of that Gym please? I pump iron too, you know - pins, needles and paper clips!! I like it. Nicely done.
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Date: 3/1/2013 7:57:00 PM
Andrea, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 3/1/2013 6:50:00 PM
Nice reading this sensual write, Andrea. Congrats on your win. (^_^)
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Date: 3/1/2013 6:17:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/1/2013 1:43:00 PM
wow andrea, this paints some...tempting images in my mind! it truly is a sensual piece, I was riveted from first line to last, congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 2/23/2013 12:20:00 PM
wow, I can just visualise all this longing at the gym - excellent entry, Andrea. Maybe if I joined a gym, a hot lady would drool over my beer belly, LOL
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Date: 2/21/2013 10:11:00 AM
Ooh never to old to look and fantasize. Great imager on the description of the male. I should get back to the gym. Nice write. Wishing you well in the contest Andrea. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/21/2013 10:05:00 AM
Hmmn... I extremely love and have enjoyed much reading this fantasy poem of yours my dearest friend! Is this a true story? ;)) :)). Well, no matter what this is a stellar write as always! It's a winner for me! Good luck again and best wishes always! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/21/2013 11:34:00 PM
It's kind of true. I was in the gym maybe about six years ago and the guy i saw got me thinking to write a poem about the "situation" one day!!
Date: 2/21/2013 7:30:00 AM
I for one adore robust and voluptuous women but who cares? Beautiful writing as always! I cannot add anything but my wishes and my appreciation of the poem!
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Date: 2/21/2013 6:50:00 AM
Ooh la la! I certainly enjoyed this sensual read. I think Cyndi will love it!
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Date: 2/20/2013 11:51:00 PM
ANDREA...?! Well I never)) who'ed a thought it.? And other such words come to mind.. L O L anyway enough of such conjecture.. Wishing you well in the contest (the poetry one mind you)
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Date: 2/20/2013 4:47:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. Coming from someone with all your accomplishments makes it even more inspirational. Only been writing on paper a few months. Always in my head. Took time to put some things down. Good luck in the contests. However, douby you need it..........rick
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Date: 2/20/2013 11:59:00 AM
Pen and paper doth provide, a place where romance might reside.......at least in this well thought piece. Very nice. RAY
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Date: 2/19/2013 6:19:00 PM
Very very funny and sweet insight into the mind. Not so different men and women, eh? I always think of things like this too. Want to be Mr. end all do all. Anyhow, your comment on $$ was right to the mark. We of the middle are becoming poorer, unfortunately. Did you see my Valentine's day piece? I think you would like it. I also posted a couple more this evening on writing. You are a bright star!
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Date: 2/19/2013 6:07:00 PM
Wow...I wanna sweat!!!!! Great job. Good luck
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Date: 2/19/2013 11:07:00 AM
ohh myyy.. love that last line !! Fantasy is a wonderful thing !!! You sure wrote a spicy one here...
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Date: 2/19/2013 9:06:00 AM
Wow, you are good! I am sure you have turned many a head Andrea. Fantastic job. If you have a chance check out my last three. Have a great day.
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Date: 2/19/2013 6:20:00 AM
Andrea, Andrea...that IS spicy...I've seen those gym mirror glances before...haha. Excellent work. And I'm from Arkansas. I'm a grain elevator foreman here...and no, I'm not out of country right now, but I've travelled a lot in the past...more time in Asia really...
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Date: 2/19/2013 1:01:00 AM
Andrea sexy, sensual, teasing, hopeful, everything the contest requires...do you have pale eyes?.....David
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/19/2013 7:53:00 AM
of course I have pale eyes, David. That's how I am able to change my colors so easily with contact lenses. I am supposedly a light green but I think it is more like gray/blue.
Date: 2/18/2013 10:23:00 PM
ha, do not worry about the soup mail.. you actually read my mind, and stopped by my poem, at the same time I send the you the soup mail.. he he he you must have read my mind, or seen my newest poem. your so sweet... xox~ PD
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Date: 2/18/2013 10:16:00 PM
Andrea, wow... never thought, you would give this contest a go... I'm impressed.. being part of a fantasy, is an amazing feeling... love this one, so so much... ps... I know you will find your way to my poem soon,, sending soup mail....xox~pd
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