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A Golden Glow Through Willow

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Gold sun rays filter
      A golden glow through Willow
Expose gold tipped blooms

Cobalt Blue streaks SkyBlue sky
      Diminishing as day flies 



Contest: Blue And Gold
Sponsor: Rick Parise

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2011

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James Fraser Date: 3/6/2011 3:43:00 PM Sara, you just may see this well executed Tanka on the winners podium in Rick's contest. You so love the cobalt word in your poems, and rightly so it's a cracking word....:) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/5/2011 4:59:00 AM Lovely vision of precious blue and gold highlights Sara.. good luck in the contest my friend.. lovely expressions in every Tanka line luv.. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/4/2011 5:31:00 PM What a lovely image in your tanka, Sara! The colors come through so vividly -- you describe them very well! Best wishes in Rick's contest, dear. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/4/2011 4:57:00 PM This is a golden write Sara. Good luck in the contest. love phyl Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/4/2011 4:46:00 PM Beautiful. Sara. I don't know how he will figure all these out. Too many good ones!! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/4/2011 1:57:00 PM wow, sara... what a gem of a tanka with matching radiant lines.. it really glows! winning luck in the contest! happy that life is better :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 3/4/2011 1:53:00 PM Beautiful continuance. The last Porch Pot is simply some male having a romantic daydream. LOve, daver Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 3/4/2011 1:28:00 PM What a beautiful write!!! I'v been busy all wekk at work so trying to catch up on all I missed... never disapointed...love Michael Login to Reply