Sara Kendrick Poet Tanka

A Golden Glow Through Willow

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Gold sun rays filter
      A golden glow through Willow
Expose gold tipped blooms

Cobalt Blue streaks SkyBlue sky
      Diminishing as day flies 



Contest: Blue And Gold
Sponsor: Rick Parise

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James Fraser March 6, 2011 at 3:43 PM Sara, you just may see this well executed Tanka on the winners podium in Rick's contest. You so love the cobalt word in your poems, and rightly so it's a cracking word....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 5, 2011 at 4:59 AM Lovely vision of precious blue and gold highlights Sara.. good luck in the contest my friend.. lovely expressions in every Tanka line luv..

Carolyn Devonshire March 4, 2011 at 5:31 PM What a lovely image in your tanka, Sara! The colors come through so vividly -- you describe them very well! Best wishes in Rick's contest, dear. Love, Carolyn

Phyllis Babcock March 4, 2011 at 4:57 PM This is a golden write Sara. Good luck in the contest. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2011 at 4:46 PM Beautiful. Sara. I don't know how he will figure all these out. Too many good ones!!

Nette Onclaud March 4, 2011 at 1:57 PM wow, sara... what a gem of a tanka with matching radiant lines.. it really glows! winning luck in the contest! happy that life is better :) huggs, nette

Daver Austin March 4, 2011 at 1:53 PM Beautiful continuance. The last Porch Pot is simply some male having a romantic daydream. LOve, daver

Michael J. Falotico March 4, 2011 at 1:28 PM What a beautiful write!!! I'v been busy all wekk at work so trying to catch up on all I missed... never disapointed...love Michael