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A Golden Glow Through Willow

. Gold sun rays filter A golden glow through Willow Expose gold tipped blooms Cobalt Blue streaks SkyBlue sky Diminishing as day flies Contest: Blue And Gold Sponsor: Rick Parise

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James Fraser

Date: 3/6/2011 3:43:00 PM

Sara, you just may see this well executed Tanka on the winners podium in Rick's contest. You so love the cobalt word in your poems, and rightly so it's a cracking word....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/5/2011 4:59:00 AM

Lovely vision of precious blue and gold highlights Sara.. good luck in the contest my friend.. lovely expressions in every Tanka line luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2011 5:31:00 PM

What a lovely image in your tanka, Sara! The colors come through so vividly -- you describe them very well! Best wishes in Rick's contest, dear. Love, Carolyn

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/4/2011 4:57:00 PM

This is a golden write Sara. Good luck in the contest. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2011 4:46:00 PM

Beautiful. Sara. I don't know how he will figure all these out. Too many good ones!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/4/2011 1:57:00 PM

wow, sara... what a gem of a tanka with matching radiant lines.. it really glows! winning luck in the contest! happy that life is better :) huggs, nette

Daver Austin

Date: 3/4/2011 1:53:00 PM

Beautiful continuance. The last Porch Pot is simply some male having a romantic daydream. LOve, daver

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/4/2011 1:28:00 PM

What a beautiful write!!! I'v been busy all wekk at work so trying to catch up on all I missed... never disapointed...love Michael