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A Glorious Field - Visual 2

Yields of green fields basked in HIS glory are being challenged

Twilight reveals long dreary paths, destination ambiguous

Only the righteous reap great bounty at the terminus.

©Nadiya (29 Jan '15)

*Won Honorable Mention in the contest 'Glorious Sijo Field's by Andrea Dietrich on 07  Feb 2015

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Skat A Date: 2/15/2015 10:45:00 PM Hi Poesy, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/15/2015 11:00:00 PM Thank you my dear friend... lov n hugs

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/10/2015 3:53:00 PM Enjoyed reading your work...I like the faith approach..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/10/2015 10:38:00 PM Thank you very much Sara... pleased that you liked it.. appreciate your visit... nad!

Jan Allison Date: 2/8/2015 2:41:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nadiya:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/8/2015 3:07:00 PM Thank you dear. Lov nad!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/8/2015 9:07:00 AM Despite sylable count I love the poem and message! Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/8/2015 11:57:00 AM Thank you very much Richard... you are ever encouraging

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 2/8/2015 4:21:00 AM Congrats Nad, be careful next time about form/syllable count etc. as Andrea said. God bless, Nad...rajat Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/8/2015 5:27:00 AM Thank you Rajat for your sound advise... lov,nad!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/8/2015 1:18:00 AM I think you had a great spiritual message with your poem. I marked it lower for syllable count being off in line three. Congrats on your HM. Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 2/8/2015 5:26:00 AM Thank you Andrea for the interesting topic... yes i was a bit ignorant i guess... happy that i got to try a new form ... luv n hugs,nad!

Frederic Parker Date: 1/31/2015 6:24:00 PM thank you for reading my visual 2, I see you wrote a more spiritual poem and I a more earthly poem..an interesting reflection of who we are...good luck in the contest my poetic friend Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/31/2015 8:48:00 PM Thank you Frederick for reading my write as well... have anice weekend.

Earl Schumacker Date: 1/31/2015 11:02:00 AM Hi Nadiya, I posted and rated this with the highest score of 7 in the system. I hope Andrea Dietrich likes it. You did a great job. Great creation. Take care. Earl Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/31/2015 11:49:00 AM Thank you Earl... pleased that you liked my pen... appreciate your rating of 7 and for taking time to visit my page with your lovely words...regards... nad!

Mohan Chutani Date: 1/30/2015 10:54:00 PM Nadiya, A lovely write. Best for contest. Mohan Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/30/2015 11:04:00 PM Pleased that you think so. Thank you very much Mohan.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/30/2015 12:22:00 PM - I hope this lovely poem will win - Breathtaking, dear Nadiya ! - // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/30/2015 1:27:00 PM Anne-Lise, your comments never fail to encourage me... appreciate your continued support friend.

Eve Roper Date: 1/30/2015 11:07:00 AM Beautiful spiritual write, Nad. A 7 Blessings Eve Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/30/2015 11:18:00 AM thank you Eve... appreciate your visit... hugs.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 1/29/2015 10:51:00 PM spiritually charged poem.Most beautiful.My fav. Love Nad> Good luck in the contest> Sure a topper>rajat Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/29/2015 11:04:00 PM Thank you so much friend... for your support and encouraging words... appreciate it... nads!

Jan Allison Date: 1/29/2015 3:21:00 PM Stunning spiritual write Nadiya - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/29/2015 3:29:00 PM Thank you Jan... very much appreciate your visit and comment... hugs.

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/29/2015 2:45:00 PM oh my, nads... a splendid piece that nourishes the soul.. much delighted..namaste and huggs Login to Reply Poesy Relish Date: 1/29/2015 2:52:00 PM Thank you Nette for your kind words and continued support... namaste my friend.. lov, nad!